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liquid platinum summer ‘cats-and-dogs’ weather monsoon season comes 22nd June 2015

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Date: 12/24/2015 4:04:00 PM
Great rain Haiku my friend. Congrats on a fine win with this superb Haiku!!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/24/2015 4:15:00 PM
Thanks Robert for all your support I do appreciate your friendship:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/24/2015 3:24:00 AM
Hi Jan. Congrats for your WIN with this beautiful haiku! ;-)
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Date: 12/24/2015 3:26:00 AM
Thanks Teddy:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/24/2015 2:13:00 AM
JAN, Congratulations on your wonderful Rain win. Have yourself a Blessed Christmas and Happy New Years. Smiles & Joy **SKAT**
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Date: 12/24/2015 3:26:00 AM
Thanks Skat:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/24/2015 1:50:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome win with this lovely haiku Jan!
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Date: 12/24/2015 3:25:00 AM
Thanks Dr Upma:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/24/2015 12:42:00 AM
Excellent Haiku! Congratulations on placing in the contest.
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Date: 12/24/2015 3:25:00 AM
Thanks Susan:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/23/2015 5:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your, Jan.
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Date: 12/23/2015 5:34:00 PM
Thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/23/2015 4:19:00 PM
"Liquid platinum"...love that, Jan. Such wonderful imagery and feeling in your loveley Haiku. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/23/2015 5:33:00 PM
Thanks so much Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/23/2015 8:57:00 PM
Love it :)
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Date: 7/24/2015 2:29:00 AM
Thanks so much for dropping by to comment Debbie :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/19/2015 10:13:00 AM
Well done Jan, I lovel 'liquid platinum.' It seems we were both on a rain theme, but I may be all wet.....Dave
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/19/2015 10:14:00 AM
Thanks for dropping by Dave i do apreciate your support:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/11/2015 8:45:00 AM
Vivid imagery Jan...and thanks for the comment...Peter
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/11/2015 9:06:00 AM
Thanks Peter I am overjoyed at the amount of comments this simple poem has received:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 7/10/2015 3:18:00 AM
This takes us to original Haiku in its Japanese attire, now being abandoned in international Haiku, including the 5/7/5 scheme and the season word (summer). I simply love it and I'm particularly impressed with the first line.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/10/2015 4:09:00 AM
Thank you si much for your lovely comment - I much prefer the traditional 5 7 5 syllable scheme myself:-)
Date: 7/8/2015 8:20:00 AM
What a beautiful haiku, your imagery is even better than the photo! I love it Jan! Warmest regards. Pandita
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Date: 7/8/2015 9:10:00 AM
Thanks Pandita I was inspired by a lesson at school where we were reading a poem called Blessing:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/5/2015 1:21:00 PM
Jan, a lovely haiku to accompany a beautiful pic 7 and thanks for visiting my senryu 13, I was pleased with the potd
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Date: 7/5/2015 1:42:00 PM
so delighted for you Broken Wings a lovely honour for a great poem:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/5/2015 12:56:00 AM
We know Rainy 'Cats-and-Dogs' whether. In the haiku you used 'summer ‘cats-and-dogs’ weather'....Excellent....We are free from crowd in monsoon...Best wishes from my heart dear..
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Date: 7/5/2015 7:38:00 AM
Thanks Sandip I am glad you liked my haiku:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/4/2015 7:54:00 PM
Hey, Sweetie. You've been on my mind. I noticed that you are not around and Soup is missing a main ingredient. Is all ok? I hope so. Hugs...You're on my mind.
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Date: 7/5/2015 7:38:00 AM
Not been around Eileen having issues at the moment and not writing:-( Hugs jan xx
Date: 7/4/2015 6:40:00 PM
superb Jan glad to see you hugs 7
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/4/2015 7:14:00 PM
thanks Shadow - early days but at least I have finally logged on:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/4/2015 4:08:00 PM
love this Jan, yes and so visual too...
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/4/2015 4:50:00 PM
Thanks so much Harry:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/1/2015 11:06:00 PM
Jan, I miss you! Hope things are ok, I am sending you a soupie on what is going on in KY.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/4/2015 4:08:00 PM
Thanks so much for dropping by to comment.I am not at my best at the moment and have not been around lately. hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/1/2015 8:02:00 AM
Nice Haiku. Cats-and-dogs weather ,very creative. :)
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Date: 7/4/2015 4:08:00 PM
Thanks so much for dropping by to comment.I am not at my best at the moment and have not been around lately. hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/30/2015 3:42:00 PM
Fine Haiku Jan, love your first line. In my poems I call the rain 'Natures Champagne' warm hugs//James xx
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Date: 7/4/2015 4:07:00 PM
Thanks so much for dropping by to comment.I am not at my best at the moment and have not been around lately. hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/28/2015 11:21:00 AM
hello.. are you there?.. I hope all is well.. did you get my soupie, dear jan?.. huggs
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Date: 7/4/2015 4:07:00 PM
Replied Nette thanks for caring. Thanks so much for dropping by to comment.I am not at my best at the moment and have not been around lately. hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/28/2015 11:00:00 AM
Where are the new ones Jan?
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Date: 7/4/2015 4:07:00 PM
Thanks so much for dropping by to comment.I am not at my best at the moment and have not been around lately. hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/27/2015 5:38:00 PM
Great time to wash all those cats and dogs.
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Date: 6/27/2015 5:13:00 PM
soupmail, sweetie
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Date: 6/26/2015 5:15:00 PM
nice three line poetry - you know there's a magazine that just published these http://threelinepoetry.com/ you should diffintely submit! Light & Love
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Date: 7/4/2015 4:06:00 PM
Thanks so much for dropping by to comment.I am not at my best at the moment and have not been around lately. Debbie your comment has made me smile for the first time in a while - I will take your advice! Hugs Jan xx
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