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liquid platinum summer ‘cats-and-dogs’ weather monsoon season comes 22nd June 2015

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Date: 7/28/2021 11:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a creative write. Few words with much said. I love to hear/watch the rain. Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Date: 7/28/2021 10:42:00 AM
Oh so descriptive Jan. Love your "platinum rain!" Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 7/28/2021 6:10:00 AM
Beautiful Creation. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/28/2021 5:59:00 AM
Seeing liquid platinum in the rainstorm…congrats, dear Jan!
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Date: 12/24/2015 4:04:00 PM
Great rain Haiku my friend. Congrats on a fine win with this superb Haiku!!
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Date: 12/24/2015 4:15:00 PM
Thanks Robert for all your support I do appreciate your friendship:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/24/2015 3:24:00 AM
Hi Jan. Congrats for your WIN with this beautiful haiku! ;-)
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Date: 12/24/2015 3:26:00 AM
Thanks Teddy:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/24/2015 2:13:00 AM
JAN, Congratulations on your wonderful Rain win. Have yourself a Blessed Christmas and Happy New Years. Smiles & Joy **SKAT**
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Date: 12/24/2015 3:26:00 AM
Thanks Skat:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/24/2015 1:50:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome win with this lovely haiku Jan!
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Date: 12/24/2015 3:25:00 AM
Thanks Dr Upma:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/24/2015 12:42:00 AM
Excellent Haiku! Congratulations on placing in the contest.
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Date: 12/24/2015 3:25:00 AM
Thanks Susan:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/23/2015 5:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your, Jan.
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Date: 12/23/2015 5:34:00 PM
Thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/23/2015 4:19:00 PM
"Liquid platinum"...love that, Jan. Such wonderful imagery and feeling in your loveley Haiku. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/23/2015 5:33:00 PM
Thanks so much Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/23/2015 8:57:00 PM
Love it :)
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Date: 7/24/2015 2:29:00 AM
Thanks so much for dropping by to comment Debbie :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/19/2015 10:13:00 AM
Well done Jan, I lovel 'liquid platinum.' It seems we were both on a rain theme, but I may be all wet.....Dave
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Date: 7/19/2015 10:14:00 AM
Thanks for dropping by Dave i do apreciate your support:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/11/2015 8:45:00 AM
Vivid imagery Jan...and thanks for the comment...Peter
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Date: 7/11/2015 9:06:00 AM
Thanks Peter I am overjoyed at the amount of comments this simple poem has received:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 7/10/2015 3:18:00 AM
This takes us to original Haiku in its Japanese attire, now being abandoned in international Haiku, including the 5/7/5 scheme and the season word (summer). I simply love it and I'm particularly impressed with the first line.
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Date: 7/10/2015 4:09:00 AM
Thank you si much for your lovely comment - I much prefer the traditional 5 7 5 syllable scheme myself:-)
Date: 7/8/2015 8:20:00 AM
What a beautiful haiku, your imagery is even better than the photo! I love it Jan! Warmest regards. Pandita
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Date: 7/8/2015 9:10:00 AM
Thanks Pandita I was inspired by a lesson at school where we were reading a poem called Blessing:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/5/2015 1:21:00 PM
Jan, a lovely haiku to accompany a beautiful pic 7 and thanks for visiting my senryu 13, I was pleased with the potd
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Date: 7/5/2015 1:42:00 PM
so delighted for you Broken Wings a lovely honour for a great poem:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/5/2015 12:56:00 AM
We know Rainy 'Cats-and-Dogs' whether. In the haiku you used 'summer ‘cats-and-dogs’ weather'....Excellent....We are free from crowd in monsoon...Best wishes from my heart dear..
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Date: 7/5/2015 7:38:00 AM
Thanks Sandip I am glad you liked my haiku:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/4/2015 7:54:00 PM
Hey, Sweetie. You've been on my mind. I noticed that you are not around and Soup is missing a main ingredient. Is all ok? I hope so. Hugs...You're on my mind.
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Date: 7/5/2015 7:38:00 AM
Not been around Eileen having issues at the moment and not writing:-( Hugs jan xx
Date: 7/4/2015 6:40:00 PM
superb Jan glad to see you hugs 7
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Date: 7/4/2015 7:14:00 PM
thanks Shadow - early days but at least I have finally logged on:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/4/2015 4:08:00 PM
love this Jan, yes and so visual too...
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Date: 7/4/2015 4:50:00 PM
Thanks so much Harry:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/1/2015 11:06:00 PM
Jan, I miss you! Hope things are ok, I am sending you a soupie on what is going on in KY.
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Date: 7/4/2015 4:08:00 PM
Thanks so much for dropping by to comment.I am not at my best at the moment and have not been around lately. hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/1/2015 8:02:00 AM
Nice Haiku. Cats-and-dogs weather ,very creative. :)
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Date: 7/4/2015 4:08:00 PM
Thanks so much for dropping by to comment.I am not at my best at the moment and have not been around lately. hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/30/2015 3:42:00 PM
Fine Haiku Jan, love your first line. In my poems I call the rain 'Natures Champagne' warm hugs//James xx
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Date: 7/4/2015 4:07:00 PM
Thanks so much for dropping by to comment.I am not at my best at the moment and have not been around lately. hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/28/2015 11:21:00 AM
hello.. are you there?.. I hope all is well.. did you get my soupie, dear jan?.. huggs
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Date: 7/4/2015 4:07:00 PM
Replied Nette thanks for caring. Thanks so much for dropping by to comment.I am not at my best at the moment and have not been around lately. hugs Jan xx
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