Rain

Oh rain! crack of dawn hectic schedule in front, you rain and sets off resentment. in severe sunlight hours, you rain and sets off delight. trash in your ruthless, sets off ache. in twilight, you drizzle to mitigate and Sets off fantasy. you rain the right spell, present massive crop harvest, sets off hope. oh rain! your influx, sets off great fervor! Yeah, sets off great fervor!

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Skat A

Date: 8/1/2013 11:18:00 PM

Hi Jenish, love the winning poem.... LOVE ~SKAT~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/30/2013 8:37:00 AM

Jenish, , congratulations... with your sweet win... luv.. Linda ...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/29/2013 8:35:00 AM

the much needed rain in our forecast such dry crops we have, a lovely write, enjoyed, ~always, Linda

Donna Jones

Date: 7/25/2013 8:32:00 PM

Yes so many different moods of rain...nice poem

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 7/25/2013 11:11:00 AM

enjoyed TFS Shadow x smiles

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/25/2013 7:22:00 AM

I enjoy the rain as long as I don't have to get out in it..A rainy day is meant to be spent inside enjoying a restful day..Thanks for the visit to my work..Enjoyed reading your creative and expressive work..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/24/2013 2:49:00 PM

a praise for RAIN. GREAT one. I think we should all do a rain dance!! We are needing it here!!! and I know my English Buddies want some too.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/24/2013 2:11:00 PM

- I'd like to change some rain against sun ..... we have too many rainy days in a year in Norway. - A clever poems and messages. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)