Rain

RAIN cloudburst strong downpour kids in small puddles played while soaked in water wet lips showed smiles and laughter “Rain will take our sorrows and pains” April 8, 2023 4.23pm Pyramids3---- 7 Lines Poetry Contest Enter Contest Sponsor: Joseph May

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Paul Callus

Date: 4/19/2023 11:20:00 AM

Rain cleanses away sadness and gives life to thirsty souls. At my advanced age, I still enjoy stamping in puddles...the child in me often takes over!! ~ I very much enjoyed this delightful poem, Len. Regards & Blessings // paul

Len Gasun
Date: 4/21/2023 6:20:00 PM

Likewise my dear friend Paul. Thank you so much for reading my poem, your uplifting words and blessings sent. Sending you lots of blessings too, to you and your writings. I'll visit you so soon ok.

Bill Baker

Date: 4/14/2023 3:36:00 PM

Nice pyramid for the contest, Len. I enjoy the pleasant poem you wrote for the contest. Good Luck! my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Len Gasun
Date: 4/17/2023 10:24:00 PM

Thank you so much my dear poet friend for stopping by, reading my poem, your encouraging comments and best wishes. My best wishes to you as well. Hugs

Kelly Deschler

Date: 4/13/2023 7:07:00 AM

There is something so refreshing and playful about the rain... It brings out the little kid in us all... I really enjoyed reading your lovely and uplifting poetry this morning. Nicely done, my friend! ... My best wishes for the contest!

Len Gasun
Date: 4/17/2023 10:23:00 PM

Thank you my dear poet friend for stopping by, reading my poem, your encouraging words and best wishes. My best wishes to you as well. Hugs

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 4/10/2023 11:40:00 AM

Pleasant images abound in this well crafted pyramid. Best wishes for the contest. :)

Len Gasun
Date: 4/11/2023 10:47:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem my dear poet friend Evelyn, your uplifting comments and your warm best wishes. My best wishes to you too. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Suzette Richards

Date: 4/8/2023 5:02:00 AM

A good poem with a strong finish, Len.

Len Gasun
Date: 4/10/2023 6:52:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading my pyramid poem and your uplifting words my dear poet friend and mentor. May God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Valsa George

Date: 4/8/2023 4:16:00 AM

Very cute write ! You have brought out the beauty of rain and the innocent enjoyment it brings on children. Lovely entry. All the best dear Len.

Len Gasun
Date: 4/10/2023 6:51:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading my pyramid poem, your uplifting words and best wishes my dear poet friend Valsa. My best wishes as well to you. God bless you always and your writngs. Hugs

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/8/2023 3:40:00 AM

Very nice, Len, I chose the same word:)

Len Gasun
Date: 4/10/2023 6:50:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear poet friend Jo for reading my poem and your uplifting comments. May I go and read yours too? Thank you so much in advance. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs