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Rain

day so full of glum and gloom before the morning starts willful rain resists to pause and gathers on the drowning bosom of solid ground chattering silenced birds unwilling to leave their hidden nest with striking beauty flowers purr their petals quiver unable to turn away open wide thirst to quench earth is still on blissful spring. 7/30/2020 Strand Completely New (15) ,Any Form,Any Theme Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 8/2/2020 12:39:00 AM
The sight of flowers opening their petals and dancing with first showers in the wind is something I really cherish and you've painted it beautifully my friend. Congratulations on your win Eve! Much love :)
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Date: 7/31/2020 10:52:00 PM
Many fitting images of rain with your signature poetic touch. Well done and congrats Eve. Hugs ~ John
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Date: 7/31/2020 1:28:00 PM
oh the purring flowers was such a GREAT image, Eve. Love your poem.
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Date: 7/31/2020 6:42:00 AM
Nice verse, Eve:)
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Date: 7/31/2020 4:02:00 AM
Such a lovely verse. I love it. God bless you dear friend
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