Rain

Rainfall from a thatched roof cloudbursts of water arriving wet flooded streets and rivers drench-pours and raincoats ; sun showers and liquid sunshine streams of water flowing through monsoon moments burst of flowers heavy dew on a leaf and, RAIN Mystic Rose 05/10/2019

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Niyna Desangre

Date: 6/14/2019 7:48:00 PM

Love the rain. It is a time to slow down and appreciate nature. I remember the old tin roof house on a farm long long ago. We told quiet stories in the big hallway atop fresh line dried blankets_ while sipping cocoa or tea and honey. Thanks for the memory!

Joseph May

Date: 5/19/2019 10:04:00 AM

Rain everywhere!.. Nicely penned Vie...

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/10/2019 1:46:00 PM

Refreshing verse, especially 'liquid sunshine' and 'heavy dew on a leaf' - feels like the morning after a rainstorm-