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Rain-Drenched Hair

'It isn't fair,' he often said, 'my rain-drenched hair is very red; without the rain, I'm blonde again, but now it's wet, it's redder yet.' written 11th April for Dear Heart Constance's It's all about 8 rhyme challenge

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Date: 4/25/2019 7:01:00 AM
I have read your creative winning work and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara
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Date: 4/23/2019 11:23:00 AM
Jack, congratulations on your win in my contest with this lol write of rain drenched hair !
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Date: 4/13/2019 2:21:00 PM
So like this catchy poem you have written Jack, its fun to read and reread - in fact I found myself repeating it like a rhyme!! Poetry hugs, Jennifer. P.S Perhaps you will enjoy my very first poem I posted on poetry soup - Blonde, absent minded or fair.
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Date: 4/12/2019 5:19:00 PM
haha, always I enjoy your humor Jack, and thanks so much for visiting the blog Carolyn did for me. I appreciate your support and friendship!
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Date: 4/12/2019 11:04:00 AM
Too cute Jack. He is a strawberry blonde. Love this. It made me smile. God Bless and Happy Easter to you and yours. JB
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Date: 4/12/2019 3:35:00 AM
Having read this, I smile and am thankful for my grey hair :) Regards // paul
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Date: 4/11/2019 10:48:00 PM
This poem made me smile and is so charming and witty. Loved it! : ) xxoo
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Date: 4/11/2019 6:19:00 PM
Very witty Jack and my auburn hair comes out of a bottle ... I mean with all the jokes who wants to be a blonde lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/11/2019 4:45:00 PM
Creative work. Way to go. Thanks for all the visits to my page. Sara
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Date: 4/11/2019 3:59:00 PM
i haven't tried dyeing my hair!...cool poem, jack..huggs
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