Rain-Drenched Hair

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I walked through wind, rain and thunder, letting my long rain-drenched hair fall; wet- I went to him in wonder, into his arms I wished to crawl. My head he clasped tight to his heart, of this love I will never part; I stayed with him all the night long, though many say this love is wrong. __________________________________ April 7, 2019 Poetry/Rhyme/Rain-Drenched Hair Copyright Protected, ID 19-1132-796-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. "This poem means a lot to me as I am writing of a deep love in my past that could not be. Sadly, it had no future but was so full of desire, passion and lust. We had to walk away but I have never and will never forget him." Submitted to the contest, Honorable Mention Worth Mentioning sponsor, Richard Lamoureux Second Place

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/13/2019 4:29:00 AM

I can relate Constance. Beautifully expressed! Congratulations on your deserving second placement! : )

Constance La France
Date: 5/13/2019 11:00:00 AM

Connie thank you for your nice comment and congratulations!

Rob Carmack

Date: 5/12/2019 11:13:00 AM

Congrats Constance.

Constance La France
Date: 5/13/2019 10:59:00 AM

Rob thanks for the congrats!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/12/2019 9:21:00 AM

Thanks for entering this gem. Congrats!

Constance La France
Date: 5/13/2019 10:59:00 AM

Richard thank for the contest and for my placement!

Panagiota Romios

Date: 4/9/2019 1:30:00 PM

Wow..love the photo. The poem, even better, a FAV for me, this is uniquely so Beautiful. Panagiota

Constance La France
Date: 4/9/2019 1:49:00 PM

Panagiota, thanks so much for the nice comment and the fav ~

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/8/2019 12:35:00 AM

This is beautifully done. Bravo, Constance!

Constance La France
Date: 4/8/2019 5:55:00 PM

Caren, thanks so much for the beautiful ~

Constance La France

Date: 4/7/2019 11:00:00 AM

This an example of Rhyme form, ababccdd, for my Writing Challenge 1, April 2019, Its All About 8. This is one of 3 form options, and one of 8 theme options. Hope you will consider entering a poem.