Raging Storm

Waves pummeled her bow, causing the schooner to rock
as a tempest wind heaved its feral breath into her sails.
The crewmen were steadfast, but had the right to balk
at warring against the strength of wild Nor'easter gales.
If I had seen warnings, we'd be safely moored at a dock.

Thunder unleashed his temper with a vicious tongue.
"Brace for another wave," I yelled to each brave mate!
Some were swept overboard; in the sea they were flung.
Three sailors tossed into the deep by an onerous spate,
when the boom cracked and split, around it had swung.

The furious storm was hellbent on gifting us to Neptune,
but against its rage, we fought with courage and heart.
When sea and sky calmed, I saw by light of a pale moon,
we were lost somewhere in the world, not on any chart.
Weatherworn ship and castaways, stranded on a dune.



10/14/2022 ~ Contest sponsored by L Milton Hankins
Three Stanzas in Quintain (Scillian) Form
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Miller Avatar
October 31, 2022 at 1:28 AM
Very dramatic, Jenna, and a well-deserved win in Milt's contest.
Logan Avatar
October 31, 2022 at 5:32 AM
Thanks, Terry. I appreciate your compliment.
Kibble Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 6:50 PM
Great images, very nice write, well deserved placing - congrats
Logan Avatar
October 31, 2022 at 5:32 AM
Thank you very much, Sean.
Bueckert Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 2:06 PM
Nicely done! Heartwrenching and exciting write, I have gordon lightfoot in my head now as well. Congrats Jenna!
Logan Avatar
October 31, 2022 at 5:31 AM
Gordon swimming and singing in that blustery sea... I can hear him! Thanks, Hat.
Fowler Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 11:54 AM
I feel I was in this storm Jenna. A tempestuous write and deserving of your win - congratulations! :)
Logan Avatar
October 31, 2022 at 5:31 AM
Thanks, Linda. I'm glad you survived it with me to make such a great comment.
Dietrich Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 10:41 AM
so dramatic. It's easy to see how it won such a great placement. Congratulations.
Logan Avatar
October 31, 2022 at 5:30 AM
Thanks for the compliments.
Hankins Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 8:44 AM
Jenna, you have allowed a drama at sea to unfold in three short stanzas. Masterfully-written. I was delighted to see it placing so high on my list. Congratulations!
Logan Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 9:13 AM
I'm very happy to be among your winning entries. Thanks so much, Milt.
Krutsinger Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 2:19 AM
I feel the fury of the sea and the wind!
Logan Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 9:12 AM
Thank you for feeling what I tried to portray, Caren.
Kyser Avatar
October 16, 2022 at 8:23 AM
So much for the three hour tour... Enjoyed, Jenna! I've been in some wretched storms, they aren't much fun - especially if you get seasick!
Logan Avatar
October 17, 2022 at 6:29 AM
The helplessness we feel at the power of mother nature is a fear not to be taken lightly. Thanks, Jeff.
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October 14, 2022 at 11:21 AM
With so much going on in the maelstrom of madness, You managed to capture the raging storm with poetic realism Jenna, superb writing and imagery, only a few more years to wait, til the rescuers come along, cheers David
Logan Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 12:58 PM
A few more years!!! I suppose we have no choice. Lol thanks for the good news and comments. David.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 10:25 AM
You had me at the picture..land I just had to find out what adventure you had us on. Some great writing…the angry sea, sailors, and a ship!
Logan Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 10:28 AM
That picture does beg to have a story behind it, Kim, and I was determined to give it one. Thanks for reading and leaving your kind comments.
Cunningham Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 9:55 AM
Brilliant writing Jenna, the sea can be cruel and unforgiving, I love poems with a nautical theme. Milton will love this one as do I. Have a lovely weekend. Tom
Logan Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 10:27 AM
Thank you so very much liking these lines, Tom. I hope you have a great weekend, too. I'll be out of town until Sunday night... alas not to anyplace as exotic as Italy.
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