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Raggedy Cars

Have you ever bought a used car and thought it was good You didn’t even check the motor or under the hood You drive it out the lot and it drives smooth And then the very next day something just aint cool You hear some funny sounds and you see a little smoke And then the car stops after you hear a big choke There your car is, it just now stopped Every car pass you and even the cops Now you’re sitting there chilling with the hazard lights on And then you see a thug come right along He give you a ride hoping you’ll make it safe Praying to God that you don’t have to escape Soon as you get home you call a mechanic and tell him what’s wrong And then he say “I’m sorry to tell you but your motor is gone.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/20/2014 12:25:00 PM
Sheena, this is very good. Love ~SKAT~
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