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Radiating Love

With angel wings and the sound of a cooing dove, This creature flew to willow tree weeping above Feeling its presence there___a light touch to my hair; Standing in awe of its love radiating above This being sent from antiquity to me__ The calming, assuring, good guide flowing above Created an aura of his abiding love; Shining, surrounding this creature floating above Out on the porch close to stars, Heaven..Sunflower___ Is absorbed in His love forever above.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/17/2013 7:01:00 PM
Hi Sara I see you have 2 ghazals I know Soups definition is hard to understand BUT my blog made it easier why not give the contest a try, I'm SURE you can do it! Light & Love
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Date: 4/27/2010 8:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your win...enjoyed...Marty
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Date: 4/27/2010 3:32:00 PM
Congrats Sara on your HM in Jared's contest .. amazing and awesome write and honor for u to so enjoy...luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/13/2010 5:36:00 AM
pretty poem
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Date: 4/12/2010 4:11:00 PM
Beautifully done
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Date: 4/11/2010 8:06:00 AM
Very very good Sara.. good luck in Jared's contest as this was a difficult form to write by and u have done a wonderful write for the contest...happy Sunday...luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 4/11/2010 7:56:00 AM
Good luck with this beauty!! Wonderful, and lovely! ...Carrie
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Date: 4/11/2010 6:11:00 AM
Wish you good luck. A fine piece of gazal
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Date: 4/11/2010 4:22:00 AM
What a beauty to read on my Sunday afternoon,lovely.
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