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Race To the Finish

My screen races on and on never a finish line Yet I can pause it on a dime But that computer on top of my neck seems to have a mind of its own May G-d pause it ~ at the appointed time

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Date: 7/19/2022 3:45:00 AM
I just let her loose and let her rip, I imagine sometimes you do too.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/19/2022 10:56:00 AM
That's right Caren. We let 'er rip now... so, we can R.I.P. later... much later, of course. ~ Of Corpse
Date: 7/17/2022 1:12:00 AM
I know the feeling, a time to work and a time to have a break that computer at the top of your head must be let loose to do its own thing, and will let you know when its ready to come back to its work station. hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 7/16/2022 6:40:00 PM
Humm. better to go outside. LOL... less trouble... Great writing regardless... Excellent as ever. Ann
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/16/2022 8:52:00 PM
Now that's thinking outside the box, Ann! And my head is shaped exactly like a box, I must say. ~ Old-fashioned Square
Date: 7/15/2022 8:58:00 AM
Let's hope that works, pausing on a dime, and that He knows how to program it! Linda
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/16/2022 8:48:00 PM
With inflation, who knows if he can find a dime to pause it on. Maybe he'll need a 20-cent piece!
Date: 7/15/2022 6:45:00 AM
just don't hit the esc/dele buttons....
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/16/2022 8:45:00 PM
Maybe the esc stands for escalator. I'll get to the top faster that way. lol.

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