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Recycled insanity plea, keep rewriting your own personal O ... B ... I ... T Rest in peace, death is the waiting room you so desire to see Shuttered windows in your head, light is a luxury not afforded to the dead Cobweb attic ... wilted flowers in a photo scrapbook Dust covered memories, only seeing pain everywhere you look Your feet are on the last step leading to death’s door Painful labored breathing now easy to ignore At your bedside sits a bottle of empty despair; you had made a habit of recycling the pain, and making the same mistakes over and over again Recycled insanity plea, always pouring your flawed decisions into a different plastic face Multiple personalities dwelling in the same desolate place Now it’s time to lay down and take a long rest, your trembling hand writes down a final request: On the way to the grave, tell the lead funeral hearst to make a left turn Why bury a body that’s gonna get burned The last house move is from a cemetery to a crematorium ... put your recycled ashes in a rusty silver urn Your last thoughts were not on God, which was really dumb May your tortured soul now rest in peace — but don’t go before the Judge of the Earth with another tired, recycled insanity plea

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 7/11/2017 10:14:00 PM
Well portrayed Mr Poet extraordinaire`. Unfortunately this poor person obviously gave up before reaching 'The Crossroads of Life.' - Just toiling a little further and facing 'terrestial death' would have prevented him from reaching for solace in the 'plastic bottle' - 'When will they ever learn?' ...Maria :)
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Date: 7/11/2017 6:36:00 PM
wow, what a powerful poem, Freddie!! Such a miserable person this describes!
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Date: 7/11/2017 2:27:00 PM
I hope I won't ever have to walk in this man's heavy shoes, Freddie...or find myself foolishly pleading insanity! Your words strike home, and the reader is left with much food for thought! Regards // paul
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 7/11/2017 2:34:00 PM
Ty, Paul. I agree totally w/you. Love always.
Date: 7/11/2017 11:26:00 AM
"At your bedside sits a bottle of empty despair". I love that line. Very creative.
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 7/11/2017 11:39:00 AM
Ty, Dale. Your kind comments are so welcome and uplifting. Love and peace always.
Date: 7/11/2017 11:08:00 AM
Love the bottle of empty despair line, RW! Your poetic pen rises to the occasion once again, my friend! Great read
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 7/11/2017 11:38:00 AM
Ty, WW. Glad you liked that line. It was a veiled allusion to prescription pain killer pill addiction, among other phobic addictions of the tortured soul in this dark poem. Appreciate the love, bro.

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