R-I-P- Nadine '06

O Nadine, death has momentarily revealed its face. Thy name shall ne'er go in vain. Yea, thou prepareth for a journey of splendor and grace. O he Lord hath laid a destine path for thee leading unto a divinely, heavenly, serenely kind of place. For thou art a flawless redest rose and the heavens be thy vase.

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/12/2011 9:14:00 PM

Such a special verse, love that last line that gives life to the rose.

Joe Maverick

Date: 7/3/2011 4:35:00 PM

Thank you for your kind comments Anthony, i see you have a talent for writing, (you do need to check spelling as we all do) i value expression and emotion 1st of all, however others may mark you down on punctuation/spelling etc, you will benefit by exersizing your capabilties in this direction, have enjoyed your above poem..!will look you up again..