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Quivering When Alone

Quivering when I'm all alone From the misery locked away Keeping me frozen to the bone As my heart quietly decays Hiding my true self from the world Quivering when I'm all alone My demons relentlessly furled While I fight to keep them unknown From all my sins I must atone Or eternity spent in hell Quivering when I'm all alone Fearing loved ones I must dispel Thanks to the secrets I harbor Negative acts none would condone Stripped of my internal armor Quivering when I'm all alone 6/11/2017

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Date: 6/28/2017 9:10:00 PM
Jeremy, I think your poem is great, well done for sure and if you had used quiver instead of quivering it would have placed in my contest without doubt.
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 6/28/2017 9:13:00 PM
Thank you, I wish I would have left out those 3 letters lol :)
Date: 6/13/2017 12:18:00 PM
Good one Jeremy.... I love this very much. Good luck in the contest :)
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 6/13/2017 12:20:00 PM
Thanks a lot!!
Date: 6/12/2017 7:28:00 PM
An excellent write, Jeremy! Well done, mate
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 6/12/2017 7:43:00 PM
Thanks a lot!!
Date: 6/12/2017 1:11:00 PM
This is very well written. Should do well in the contest. Good luck Jeremy.
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 6/12/2017 1:13:00 PM
It's actually Jeremy but thanks so much :) Take care and God bless

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