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Quit Not, Reach Top Spot

Two men were thrown into two pits Mark builds some stairs, but Martin sits While Martin kept crying, Mark quit not, kept trying And reached the top with his sharp wits 05.21.2021 For Margarita Lillico's "Quitters never win" contest

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Anisha Dutta

Date: 6/16/2021 9:57:00 PM

Right Approach. Perfect Match with Picture. Congrats to win. I love the poem.

Jan Allison

Date: 6/14/2021 2:59:00 PM

excellent interpretation of the pic, I am convinced I commented on this when it was posted but the comment is gone:-( many congrats Jo:-) hugs jan xx

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/13/2021 9:19:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A cute write and picture. Never give up. Have a blessed day/week...............

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/13/2021 7:32:00 PM

A big CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Jo. Janice

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 5/21/2021 12:59:00 PM

Excellent Limerick Jo, just perfect for the picture… Belle

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/21/2021 1:34:00 AM

A very intelligent limerick. Shows great comparison between a doer and a dejected person.

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/20/2021 11:20:00 PM

WoW! Jo, This is a good Limerick for the contest theme. It expresses the theme very well. You described the photo well. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis