Joanna Daniel Poet Limerick

Quit Not, Reach Top Spot

Two men were thrown into two pits
Mark builds some stairs, but Martin sits
While Martin kept crying,
Mark quit not, kept trying
And reached the top with his sharp wits



05.21.2021


For Margarita Lillico's "Quitters never win" contest

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Anisha Dutta June 16, 2021 at 9:57 PM Right Approach. Perfect Match with Picture. Congrats to win. I love the poem.

Jan Allison June 14, 2021 at 2:59 PM excellent interpretation of the pic, I am convinced I commented on this when it was posted but the comment is gone:-( many congrats Jo:-) hugs jan xx

Paula Goldsmith June 13, 2021 at 9:19 PM Congratulations on your win. A cute write and picture. Never give up. Have a blessed day/week...............

Janice Canerdy June 13, 2021 at 7:32 PM A big CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Jo. Janice

Beryl Edmonds May 21, 2021 at 12:59 PM Excellent Limerick Jo, just perfect for the picture… Belle

Victor Buhagiar May 21, 2021 at 1:34 AM A very intelligent limerick. Shows great comparison between a doer and a dejected person.

Alexis Y. May 20, 2021 at 11:20 PM WoW! Jo, This is a good Limerick for the contest theme. It expresses the theme very well. You described the photo well. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis