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Quiet Woods

Quiet Woods My feet traverse along a path unknown In deep dark green I find a place so rare To spend in quiet solitude, alone. I fancied that I saw a vision there And moving not a muscle to forewarn A weasel, in the bushes, held my stare No sound, save that of blackbird in the thorn No leaf upon a tree so much as shook A silence so profound on air is borne Young rabbit, unsuspecting,by the brook Too late perceives the hunter’s bounding leap. Misfortune mine to read from nature’s book With prey, the weasel melts in forest deep And lilting blackbird utters not a cheep ‘Beautiful Form’ Terza Rima sponsor Catie Lindsay. 23rd May 2010

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Date: 9/9/2010 4:04:00 PM
Congradulations on having your poem featured Margaret, I am pleased to have read this, enjoyed, and best wishes to your upcoming days..P.D.
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Date: 9/7/2010 10:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Margaret. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/5/2010 12:00:00 PM
Congrats Margaret on your featured poem this week on the Soup .. a nice one to share with us all this holiday weekend.. hope u are doing well during your hiatus from Soup..with luv..
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Date: 5/28/2010 6:41:00 AM
Beautiful description here, at some lines it seems like time is standing still, like you're captured an image in a second through your words. kisses, Emily
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Date: 5/25/2010 11:16:00 PM
This was excellent, and I love the theme!
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Date: 5/24/2010 7:06:00 AM
came back to yours. Man, did Catie REQUIRE the two lines because yes, I think both ways are given as possible. Crap!! I might be screwed, Anyway I still love yours a lot too! LUv, andrea
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Date: 5/23/2010 2:01:00 PM
A wonderful Terza Rima, you penned a lovely verse. Good luck in the contest. I love it! Caryl
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Date: 5/23/2010 7:08:00 AM
Awesome imagery, Margaret. I'm not familiar with this form, but enjoyed the visions in the quiet woods. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/23/2010 1:27:00 AM
I think this one should do well, It's quietly lovely, Margaret! Luv, andrea
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Date: 5/22/2010 9:33:00 PM
I enjoyed the quite woods with you. Nicely penned. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 5/22/2010 7:56:00 PM
beautiful poem! thanks for sharing
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