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"I am on a journey to quietus, serenity and tranquility, and find myself falling into a state soundless repose." Quote by - Constance Tomb-like silent quiets my soul, and my mind is at rest; as I fall into the keyhole, of a deep soundless quest ! Tranquil, still, I find peace, and all my worries cease_ I write a masterpiece ! Words fall pliant tomb-like silent ! ____________________ January 26, 2022 Poetry/Rhyme/Quietus/Tomb-like Silent Copyright Protected, ID 01-1424627-26 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Quietus form is created by Unseeking Seeker Written for the Standard contest, Quietus (Jan. 2022 Edition) sponsor, Unseeking Seeker, Judged 02/20/2022 First Place

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Date: 2/25/2022 10:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write/picture. From time to time, a day of peace is needed by all. Have a great/blessed day..................
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Constance La France
Date: 2/25/2022 12:48:00 PM
Paula, thanks so much for the congratulations and the compliment, blessings ~Constance
Date: 2/22/2022 3:36:00 PM
GREAT writing, Dear Heart. I can easily see how this got a first place. Congratulations
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Constance La France
Date: 2/23/2022 8:53:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 2/22/2022 10:54:00 AM
So creative Constance with fresh images that speak loudly of experiencing the silence that produces such a gem as this one! Congratulations on your win! Many blessings of creative tranquility to you!
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Constance La France
Date: 2/22/2022 1:02:00 PM
Sam, thank you so much for the compliment and comment and congratulations, appreciate ~Constance
Date: 2/20/2022 6:57:00 AM
Superb piece my dear friend Constance. Congratulations on your well-deserved win! Thanks for sharing.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/21/2022 8:37:00 AM
Len, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations ~Constance
Date: 2/20/2022 4:50:00 AM
Thank you for participating … congrats on your win, hope you enjoyed the Quietus form! Your other Quietus won a POTD, great news for this form!
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Constance La France
Date: 2/21/2022 8:39:00 AM
Seeker, thank you so much for the inspiration, and contest, and my placement using your created form Quietus, and for the congrats, I love this form ~Constance
Date: 1/26/2022 12:00:00 PM
Constance, this is just precious! I loved the theme, the way it flowed, and your perfect rhymes. Best wishes in the contest.
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Constance La France
Date: 1/27/2022 8:14:00 AM
Milt, thank you so much for the compliment and the encouragement ~
Date: 1/26/2022 11:39:00 AM
Hello Constance, Good luck in the contest. This is a peaceful piece of poetry. Tranquility & Love. Darlene.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/27/2022 11:52:00 AM
Hello Constance you are very welcome. Tranquility & Love, Darlene
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Constance La France
Date: 1/27/2022 8:15:00 AM
Darlene, thank you so much for the encouragement and the compliment ~
Date: 1/26/2022 10:14:00 AM
as I fall into the keyhole, of a deep soundless quest ! Love these two lines especially. Very beautiful piece. Tranquility is one of my favorite words. Good luck in the contest.
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Constance La France
Date: 1/27/2022 8:16:00 AM
Eileen, thank you so much for the compliment and the encouragement ~