Quiescent

Quietly, subdued... eyes mostly closed Unassumingly, I wait for my time It's not like my life passes me by Every day, maybe is my day Seeking acceptance and fulfillment to be Cared for, caressed, comforted, so Enchanted by perfection that Nothing starts until that day, that might arrive Too late

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/14/2024 9:39:00 AM

Very impressive winning work. Way to go.Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Congratulations. Sara K

Di11y Da11y
Date: 2/14/2024 12:15:00 PM

Thanks Sara, very kind

Constance La France

Date: 2/14/2024 5:53:00 AM

Dilly, wonderful writing and congratulations on your win in my contest, hugs, Constance

Di11y Da11y
Date: 2/14/2024 12:15:00 PM

Thank you

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/13/2024 1:40:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative Acrostic write. I also enjoy writing/reading the Acrostic style. Enjoy your day with your win....................

Di11y Da11y
Date: 2/14/2024 12:15:00 PM

Thanks Paula, appreciated

Speaks Volumes

Date: 2/9/2024 8:59:00 PM

Brilliant Acrostic D. I feel the laid back easy going vibe as I read, BOL in the contest. Wen

Di11y Da11y
Date: 2/10/2024 12:23:00 AM

I'm all about the vibes Wen! Glad you liked it :)

David Kavanagh

Date: 2/1/2024 12:26:00 PM

Well little miss super nova, scientists believe that stars dim into quiescence just before going nova, will a new sparkling neutron star be pulsing here in the aftermath tomorrow? nice acrostic! Cheers David

Di11y Da11y
Date: 2/1/2024 12:33:00 PM

Haha I did not know that - maybe accidentally being in the room when The Sky at Night was on in the 80s got into my psyche :)