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With the challenge of writing a poem in the now I reach for my pen, a lightning quick draw Gun slinging the page with a six shooter of words Letters ricocheting off of the page, escaping the poems claw Defeating all who dare to challenge my ink shooter Walking tall in Poetry soup's Wild West Poets work, slinging words left and right We enter contest, to conquer and be the best Today I'll spur the paper with cowboy up Put my words down with the quickness Winning the buckle of Glory Riding this bull named "dirty business" I'm riding off into the sunset another notch in my belt The legend of the "Word Slinger" has begun Conquering all from the east to the west Riding in glory, clearing the dust second to none ------------------------------------------------------------------ Inspired by Matt caliri contest - Write now- took me 30 minutes to write and type 8-19-09 had lots of fun!!!!!!!!!! purely fictional :-)

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Date: 9/14/2009 1:22:00 PM
Amazing write Abe>>James
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Date: 9/14/2009 12:47:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Matt's contest Abe.Rgds Brian
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Date: 9/12/2009 12:04:00 PM
Hey Abe, congrats on your success in the contest...Raul
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Date: 9/12/2009 6:51:00 AM
Hey! Qucik draw, that was incredible in both visual and content. Congratulations on your well deserved win in Matt's contest. Love, Lainie
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Date: 9/12/2009 5:18:00 AM
Congratulations, Word Slinger! You did well! Your “Write Now” poem is among the winners in Matt’s contest. Your poem was fun to read, amazing imagination. Keep up the good writing. SMILES… Dane Ann
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Date: 9/11/2009 1:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Matt's contest Abe. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/11/2009 12:36:00 PM
You really put the Giddy-Up in your amazing poem, my friend!!!! That six-shooter was aimed right at the winning circle.....as you ride out into the sunset, we are all asking..."who was that masked man??"!!
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Date: 9/2/2009 12:48:00 AM
Nice work, best of luck in the contest...Raul
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Date: 8/27/2009 12:34:00 PM
Got a chuckle out of this creative piece. I predict winners circle in the contest. Good luck. I like the interesting flavor of this piece. The second stanza really drew me with it's action. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind comment. Have a good day! Karen
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Date: 8/25/2009 7:33:00 PM
love the tempo of this write! much fun! Abe! jim
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Date: 8/25/2009 1:55:00 PM
Well written piece....very nice.....congrats -Jessica
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Date: 8/19/2009 2:03:00 PM
This one will be hard to beat in the contest. Good luck. I enjoyed it so much. Barbara
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Date: 8/19/2009 1:36:00 PM
Gidddy Uuuupp Cowboy!! Yee haaawww!! Rawhideeeee......!!!!!!
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Date: 8/19/2009 12:46:00 PM
awesome----charma
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Date: 8/19/2009 11:16:00 AM
This is awesome Abe...today I will spur the paper with cowboy up/put my words down with the quickness...awesome writing..this is terrific.
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