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Quick Change

It was quick, as this will be The rise of crimson and orange color, Shining across the sky Fading to pink, before my eyes Then gray clouds rushed in as if, A sky once on fire turned to smoke Heidi Sands 3/10/19

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Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 3/10/2019 10:42:00 AM

OH, this is fantastic. Straight to the faves~ xomo!

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/10/2019 10:55:00 AM

Thank you so much Maureen! I appreciate your kind comment and considering this a fave. Have a great day :)

Charles Messina

Date: 3/10/2019 8:42:00 AM

Quick with great imagery, Heidi. Lovely write :) Happy Sunday...Charlie

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/10/2019 10:53:00 AM

Thank you Charlie! Happy Sunday to you too :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/10/2019 8:16:00 AM

I feel like I am watching the change as it is happening..a pleasant read.

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/10/2019 10:53:00 AM

I am happy to hear that Vijay. It is exactly how it happened this morning. It is snowing heavy now. Thank you for your comment. Have a nice day :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/10/2019 8:00:00 AM

Heidi, I feel like I am there thanks to your wonderful image in the form of a beautiful poem.

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/10/2019 10:52:00 AM

That is great to hear Caren. It is exactly how it happened this morning :) Thank you for your kind comment !