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Questions In Color

the sky turns pale blue above horizon brushed pink fallen moments shine I am struck by what I think where did the precious time go? Heidi Sands 8/31/22 Placed 3rd in the Brian Strand Premiere Choice Poetry Contest.

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Suzanne Delaney

Date: 10/2/2022 2:10:00 AM

Moments to ponder give us these precious insights, Heidi. Enjoyed this one a lot. SuZ

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/2/2022 6:02:00 AM

I am happy to hear you enjoyed it. Thank you Suzanne :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/26/2022 11:30:00 AM

Dear Heidi, your poem is both beautiful and deeply moving. Your imagery is evocative and the last line is so wistful and so delicately done.. I feel your tanka, my friend. Splendid poetry! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/26/2022 3:36:00 PM

Thank you very much Susan. I hope all is well and you have a nice evening :)

Lisa Ricci

Date: 9/8/2022 4:46:00 AM

Good Morning Heidi. This is lovely. The sky whether day or night is wondrous and beautiful. Your words prove it as it moves through its transformations. Thank you for sharing and providing imagery. Have a wonderful morning and day. (smile)

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/8/2022 5:01:00 AM

Good morning Lisa. It is nice to see your positive feedback today. I appreciate it. Thank you. I hope you have a nice day :)

Jim Slaughter

Date: 9/6/2022 1:19:00 PM

Great piece, Heidi. Why is it, I wonder, that it doesn't seem "precious" at all when you think you have all the time in the world? But, boy! I sure ask myself that question a lot these days.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/6/2022 1:22:00 PM

Good point Jim. Thank you for your input :)