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Questions What defines... success? Is it how many people you know. Is it where you have been, or where you will go? Is it who you talk with each day, is it someone you pay to stay? How do we measure ourselves? Too tall, too short, too. How do others take note of us? What do they think? Why do they care? Why should we care...? Brothers in need. Sisters that bleed. Alone in the darkness of life. Gather together and be comforted. A Savior has been born. He is King! We live in a time of change, and woke until we are choked... But the truth rays through, like the sun in the clouds. You can say it is not there, but we all know and stop... and stare! A. Foster, Ann Foster, Annette Foster

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Date: 2/11/2022 11:38:00 AM
Hello Ann Foster, this gives me something to ponder. So I will. Enjoy your day my friend.Hugs.
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Date: 6/26/2021 3:15:00 AM
What defines success? A thought provoking question Ann loved the positive ending. Now I will think about it. Exactly what it means to me....
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Date: 6/26/2021 2:50:00 AM
A thought provoking poem that ends in the hope above all hopes, the Saviour:) well penned, Ann:)
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