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Queen of the House

They’d had a fight and he’d gone out for “air.” Now he’d returned, a frown still on his face. She knew him well and she did not fight fair! She’d quickly guessed the way she would erase his apprehensions. Now to set the scene which would take place, there wasn’t much to do. Embracing splendor, she looked like a queen, and her intentions he’d not misconstrue. The scent of flowers she’d dabbed on her skin. Her mouth she’d painted and her hair let down. It fell - gold water - and with no chagrin, she left inside the closet her best gown. His scowl fast vanished as he came undone. Nude on the staircase, the battle she’d won. Oct. 13, 2019 For the 'NUDE - descending a staircase' Poetry Contest of John Lawless

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Date: 10/18/2019 9:52:00 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. I am sure this is close to one that would not pass the standards for the site. Sara
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/18/2019 6:33:00 PM
Hardly, Sara (compared to other things I've seen here!)
Date: 10/17/2019 10:24:00 PM
This is a clever take on the contest. I hope you place high.
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Date: 10/15/2019 8:32:00 PM
A battle never lost...Best wishes in the Contest Andrea..
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Date: 10/15/2019 11:37:00 AM
Ding, ding, ding! We have a winner ;) Loved this extraordinary piece <3 Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 10/14/2019 7:29:00 PM
Hello Andrea … retained knowledge works well, to the point of never losing; perhaps - enjoyed another one of your sonnets Andrea - Lindsay
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Date: 10/14/2019 7:12:00 PM
'As he came undone' love your sonnet, Andrea, can't enter birdlady, it's an old poem,
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Date: 10/14/2019 6:10:00 PM
LOL! The switch flipped!
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Date: 10/14/2019 1:53:00 PM
Hm, a bit tricky charm of nudity, an illegal hooking toward men) Lovely sonnet. Good luck in the contest, Andrea.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/14/2019 5:56:00 PM
nothing illegal, heehee. Too bad it won't work on MY hubbie! He is too stubborn even for that!
Date: 10/14/2019 12:52:00 PM
Nice use of form here. That painting by Marcel Duchamp was called "an explosion in a shingle factory" by critics. It is - I believe - a good one to write poetry about. Thanks for your kind words! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 10/14/2019 9:50:00 AM
This works with me every time *lol* This is my favourite so far. Best of luck in the contest.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/14/2019 12:01:00 PM
thanks so much, sure hope the judge likes it enough to place it on the list!
Date: 10/14/2019 9:06:00 AM
Lovely sonnet my friend...great entry Andrea...bol...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 10/14/2019 6:35:00 AM
A fun read Andrea--she knew him well--all the best.
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Date: 10/14/2019 1:03:00 AM
I'm blushing too... God bless you, Gina
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Date: 10/13/2019 8:33:00 PM
Wow, I think I'm blushing. :) This is right out of a harlequin romance novel. :) I like. :)
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