Queen of the House

They’d had a fight and he’d gone out for “air.”
Now he’d returned, a frown still on his face.
She knew him well and she did not fight fair!
She’d quickly guessed the way she would erase
his apprehensions. Now to set the scene
which would take place, there wasn’t much to do.
Embracing splendor, she looked like a queen,
and her intentions he’d not misconstrue.
The scent of flowers she’d dabbed on her skin.
Her mouth she’d painted and her hair let down.
It fell - gold water - and with no chagrin,
she left inside the closet her best gown.

His scowl fast vanished as he came undone.
Nude on the staircase, the battle she’d won.

Oct. 13, 2019
For the 'NUDE - descending a staircase' Poetry Contest of John Lawless
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Kendrick Avatar
October 18, 2019 at 9:52 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. I am sure this is close to one that would not pass the standards for the site. Sara
Dietrich Avatar
October 18, 2019 at 6:33 PM
Hardly, Sara (compared to other things I've seen here!)
Ligon Avatar
October 17, 2019 at 10:24 PM
This is a clever take on the contest. I hope you place high.
May Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 8:32 PM
A battle never lost...Best wishes in the Contest Andrea..
There Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 11:37 AM
Ding, ding, ding! We have a winner ;) Loved this extraordinary piece <3 Good luck in the contest :)
Laurie Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 7:29 PM
Hello Andrea … retained knowledge works well, to the point of never losing; perhaps - enjoyed another one of your sonnets Andrea - Lindsay
Horsman Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 7:12 PM
'As he came undone' love your sonnet, Andrea, can't enter birdlady, it's an old poem,
Rodrigues Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 6:10 PM
LOL! The switch flipped!
Ravidas Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 1:53 PM
Hm, a bit tricky charm of nudity, an illegal hooking toward men) Lovely sonnet. Good luck in the contest, Andrea.
Dietrich Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 5:56 PM
nothing illegal, heehee. Too bad it won't work on MY hubbie! He is too stubborn even for that!
Anish Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 12:52 PM
Nice use of form here. That painting by Marcel Duchamp was called "an explosion in a shingle factory" by critics. It is - I believe - a good one to write poetry about. Thanks for your kind words! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Lamoureux Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 9:50 AM
This works with me every time *lol* This is my favourite so far. Best of luck in the contest.
Dietrich Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 12:01 PM
thanks so much, sure hope the judge likes it enough to place it on the list!
Warrior Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 9:06 AM
Lovely sonnet my friend...great entry Andrea...bol...^WW^ :o)
Pandit Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 6:35 AM
A fun read Andrea--she knew him well--all the best.
Mcintosh Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 1:03 AM
I'm blushing too... God bless you, Gina
Johnson Avatar
October 13, 2019 at 8:33 PM
Wow, I think I'm blushing. :) This is right out of a harlequin romance novel. :) I like. :)
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