queen of my world

my daddy built me a tree house
in the back forty of our property
between two cottonwood trees

I used to take seven books up there
with a pillow and read for hours
during the summer when I was eight,
nine, ten, eleven and twelve

there was such comfort watching black ants
travel up and down the bumpy tree trunk
listening to the neighbors chatting and laughing
they met at their clotheslines

I always knew who was watching tv
I could see the lights flicker from their windows
I knew who was arguing too
Queen of my world
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Bauer Avatar
September 9, 2024 at 1:42 PM
what a delightful description of your tree house and the time you spent there, caren! it sounds magical to me!
Krutsinger Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 7:54 AM
I have so many fond memories spying on the neighbors
Conn Avatar
September 9, 2024 at 2:04 AM
A clean house is a sign of a wasted life.
Krutsinger Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 7:54 AM
this is my idea also Chris
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