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queen of my world

my daddy built me a tree house in the back forty of our property between two cottonwood trees I used to take seven books up there with a pillow and read for hours during the summer when I was eight, nine, ten, eleven and twelve there was such comfort watching black ants travel up and down the bumpy tree trunk listening to the neighbors chatting and laughing they met at their clotheslines I always knew who was watching tv I could see the lights flicker from their windows I knew who was arguing too Queen of my world

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Date: 9/9/2024 1:42:00 PM
what a delightful description of your tree house and the time you spent there, caren! it sounds magical to me!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/10/2024 7:54:00 AM
I have so many fond memories spying on the neighbors
Date: 9/9/2024 2:04:00 AM
A clean house is a sign of a wasted life.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/10/2024 7:54:00 AM
this is my idea also Chris

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