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QUEEN and KING

QUEEN


Queen
Wealthy
Knights delight
Off with the head
Public appearance 
Ruler of her domain
Kingdom all in love with her
Joker enjoyment of her day
Crown comes with hope, more than expected
King is nothing with out her by his side


KING

King
Foolish
Crown from birth
Battle with in
Gravel at his feet
Castle guarded armor 
Feast prepared just for a king
Lovely mistress among peasant 
Medieval time war brought down the peace
Queen rules kingdom, when horse returns alone



Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/13/2015 1:40:00 PM
Linda, these Etherees are great. Loved the read. Thank you. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia
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Date: 9/13/2014 8:03:00 PM
Loved the last line especially
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Date: 6/4/2014 8:43:00 AM
Dearest & beautiful sis-bff of mine, my good morning hugs to u & your loved ones. I'm so glad to have time @ soup tonight. My busy days keepin things in order @schl after classrooms renovation is over.:) So grateful I found this very precious gem of yours which I've missed before. A special form of poem which u did it very well. Salute & big hugs to my greatest poet 4ever! Hope I can try this form next time. TYSM! Hope u're doin well. You're in my thoughts. Miss & love u. lovem4evr-Leo
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Date: 5/21/2014 11:33:00 PM
I'm for the Queen of Hearts myself, as portrayed in my song Lady Luck Stomped Out.
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Date: 1/13/2014 1:49:00 AM
Long live the Queen***********************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************
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Date: 6/16/2013 5:32:00 PM
thank you for the lovely, featured poem..... soup people ............................... LINDA
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Date: 6/13/2013 8:36:00 AM
Nice poem. Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 12/14/2012 2:22:00 PM
a 10 minute poem, just gets better...
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Date: 7/30/2012 6:53:00 PM
Every man wonders about the power of women;muses over the strength that his woman will give - I need to read this puzzling piece more than once my Sphinx - so beautiful in it's mystery; nice tempo - I love it! With respect, J.A.B. %
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Date: 9/22/2011 8:26:00 PM
Quite a build-up for a delightful poem'. Thank you darling XX. Your friend in the pen/G.FIELDS I AM GOING TO RECOMMEND THIS ONE. (for me)
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Date: 6/22/2010 9:15:00 PM
Nicely written!!! I liked this!!! vrushani!!!
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Date: 6/21/2010 8:13:00 AM
I like this double Etheree poem. The sequence certainly tells a story about how ignorant at they were. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/20/2010 2:13:00 PM
P.D. I am looking to see people who may have entered my contest and I didn't give them a win or something. I always feel so bad to have to eliminate people for not following rules, etc. I saw your one etheree(or two here) and remembered how well you did with this. Why didn't you do another one? THey are EASY as pie for you, right??? Maybe next time! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 6/19/2010 12:19:00 PM
Great stuff you ...and you say i rock Mmmmm its you baby !!! sarah x
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Date: 6/2/2010 8:50:00 AM
that last line of yours really made me smile ^_^! really enjoyed the contrasts that you put here & yup, all that rain is making me read about rain ;), hoping to be inspired to write too--& I liked your perspective on my poem being mad at first (my thinking there was it was a child asking the questions, but come to think of it-- it does sound like I'm mad & it gives a better meaning/perspective for that rainbow), thanks for your insights! ^_^
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Date: 5/24/2010 10:12:00 PM
so i was looking around on your page earlier and through the day when i was online, seeing if you had another entertaining poem to post so i could comment you.and i noticed i missed this one from last week.i only don't like to overwhelm with the many you already have, which is awesome, you know you're hot P.D. this is cute.its nice to be wed in royalty, right.(: you're like this yourself.lolz.have a cool night, always a friend to you! -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 5/23/2010 9:22:00 PM
Behind a good queen is a silent king...good write,,,thanks on You Can, glad that you liked it..Danny
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Date: 5/22/2010 5:09:00 AM
Good one, destroyer! Let's have a competition, though I am sure you're gonna win...lol ;)
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Date: 5/11/2010 10:10:00 AM
Awesome job! (:
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Date: 5/9/2010 4:04:00 AM
This is still true in our days! Take for example the British Qeen!!! Well written, PD! And thanks for your comments...Gert
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Date: 5/8/2010 8:01:00 AM
Well done!
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Date: 5/7/2010 4:35:00 PM
Dis the king twice, only a female would perform such words
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Date: 5/7/2010 3:39:00 PM
CUTE, ONCE AGAIN L.) S.M.
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Date: 5/7/2010 8:40:00 AM
very nice write queens rule thanks for your kind comments and have a great weekend faleshia
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Date: 5/7/2010 6:19:00 AM
Yay Queens! Like Elizabeth pwning The King of Spain
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