Pyjamas Get Twisted

In spite of a warning voice that comes in the night Our pyjamas get twisted, strangle us in spite But as hard as we try Punching people nearby We wake up in the morning, say sorry for the smite
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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January 31, 2018 at 5:48 PM
Got something new for tonight//I'll try out the Jackson smite//didn't have lunch//so I'll throw a mean punch//I hope I come out all right. SMITE ON JACK THE SAMPSON MAN!!!
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January 31, 2018 at 6:38 PM
PRENEZ GARDE! Wifey may be the one packing a mean punch!!! CAREFUL!!!
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January 31, 2018 at 8:03 AM
The limerick and your response to SO a delight! Giggles ;)
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January 31, 2018 at 8:12 AM
SO has become a fantastic friend as have you my dear Mo Lovesies xoxoxo
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January 31, 2018 at 7:02 AM
Oh dear.. your poor missus...
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January 31, 2018 at 7:11 AM
Bruises all over hr bod... got bruises too from heading the headboard! Guess the answer is nakedness!!! YEE HAW! Aw the freedom!
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