Pushing Up Daisies

my mom’s not pushing up daisies
having gone to her eternal rest in Spring
her restful place is where her soul has gone
back to earth with its raindrop-moss
(springy, as if for a tiny bunny
or hallucination-size “wabbit”)
off track, the violet urn
next to the frame
that holds my mother’s face
and my attention
confused by the unscattered ashes
contained. she’s there
or elsewhere
or both ways
dizzy the thoughts
and my nephew
on and over a couple
mountaintops   where is he
particles placed, displaced
proper, improper
does it matter
it all matters
and the occasional shock
of a true blue viewing
passing by the other room
while relative remains
seem sentiments of denial
until a video snaps
you out of it
suddenly appears
the ghost
or a huge photograph
reminds you
why your there
in that chair
listening to the air
breathing
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Hind Avatar
April 8, 2025 at 11:27 PM
Deep and soul-searching - sometimes there's just no answer, sigh*
Rodrigues Avatar
April 9, 2025 at 6:52 AM
Just exploring of thoughts, wrestling things out as time goes on…
Rodgers Avatar
April 8, 2025 at 9:31 AM
Dear Kim, Deeply moving and beautifully reflective. I loved how you captured the intricate emotions surrounding loss and memory with such grace. The scenes of your mom's eternal rest intertwined with nature is soothing, evoking a sense of peace amidst confusion. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Rodrigues Avatar
April 8, 2025 at 11:28 AM
Thank you, Daniel. xx
Sands Avatar
April 8, 2025 at 7:11 AM
I was captured by this. Very well written poem Kim :)
Rodrigues Avatar
April 8, 2025 at 11:36 AM
Thank you so much, Heidi
Rolland Avatar
April 8, 2025 at 4:53 AM
touching poem, dear poet, i can feel that emotion too, when my mother passed away, it was spring and primroses were everywhere, thanks for the jewel
Rodrigues Avatar
April 8, 2025 at 11:30 AM
My heart goes out to you, too, my friend.
Singh Avatar
April 7, 2025 at 9:46 PM
Tension between physical remains and spiritual or emotional presence of the deceased.Very nicely penned.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 8, 2025 at 11:31 AM
Thank you, my friend
DiMino Avatar
April 7, 2025 at 2:11 PM
I don't believe love is every entirely parted -- we live in them, wherever they are...and they, in the depths of our hearts for all eternity. Lovely read.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 7, 2025 at 2:33 PM
One day we will understand. Hugs ~ Kim
Crandall Avatar
April 6, 2025 at 3:37 PM
One place I know where they are - in your memory and your heart.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 7, 2025 at 9:57 AM
Thanks, David! Hugs xx
Andresen Avatar
April 6, 2025 at 6:09 AM
- Thoughts to make you dizzy... thoughts which we don't know the answer... - The daisies will soon bloom at your mother's grave, Kim :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
April 6, 2025 at 1:25 PM
My mom is in an urn, hence my mom’s “not” pushing up daisies… “and my attention confused by the unscattered ashes contained.” Really about the sadness and confusion of it all. Hugs! Thank you sweet poet.
Mckeithan Avatar
April 5, 2025 at 11:34 PM
Good poem Kim. A different take on death and what remains.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 6, 2025 at 5:53 AM
It has been 4 years this month. Bless you, Oliver.
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