Pursuit

Cloud after cloud floats The days we floated in joy In waves of jasmine Are all dull grey dense vapor Or rains from lost coupled clouds? _______________________________________________________ August 10, 2016

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Pheko Motaung

Date: 8/13/2016 10:37:00 PM

A wonderful fantastically woven tanka!thank you

Probir Gupta
Date: 8/14/2016 2:10:00 AM

Thank you ...

Mrunali Damania

Date: 8/11/2016 2:41:00 PM

Beautiful!

Probir Gupta
Date: 8/12/2016 2:04:00 AM

Thank you ...

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/10/2016 2:04:00 AM

A marveously poetic Tanka my friend, Probir!

Probir Gupta
Date: 8/10/2016 10:29:00 AM

THANK YOU ...

David Smith

Date: 8/9/2016 11:22:00 PM

Sad but true. Life is quite an enigma my friend. Well written though. I have put my name in hat for Mayor of my city. May not be on line as often til elections over. My daughters 25th birthday today. You look after yourself. Your friend in NZ David.

Probir Gupta
Date: 8/10/2016 10:31:00 AM

THANK YOU ... THE MAYORAL NEWS IS GREAT ... ALL THE BEST ...

Lewis Raynes

Date: 8/9/2016 8:31:00 PM

nice write Probir.

Probir Gupta
Date: 8/9/2016 11:10:00 PM

thank you Lewis ...