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Pursuing Increments of Measure

You’ve pierced my inner thoughts but how? I can only hope its not imaginary justifications. It seems you could fill the empty holes of my battle scared heart. What ever it is; there’s worst places for my heart to be; So I gladly waltz to the melodic rhythms of love perhaps found And you are so beautiful; The colors you emanate pass through me; Reflected as my very own so don’t hesitate. Everything you desire of me I offer up to you; I give to you with privilege; and what I give I’ll never take back.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/20/2009 9:01:00 PM
Marty ; Thanks partner.
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Date: 12/20/2009 9:00:00 PM
Beverly C I've been at a low point in my poetry because of some ones very harsh opinions of my entry. A part of me wanted to slice him to pieces with my words but I kept myself in check but consequently I haven't had much faith in the actual quality of my work so thank you very much for your kindnesses.
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Date: 11/1/2009 11:11:00 PM
Boo... Ain't nothing like the real thing,as your fine work is.Hope to see you and your wonderful better half soon.Too long, Bev
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Date: 10/22/2009 8:12:00 PM
This is so moving...I enjoyed reading tonight...Marty
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