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Purpose or Obliteration

Daniel Henry Rodgers

 

"Between illumination and silence exists a fragile geometry
of consciousness where light is both revelation and
prison and the soul flickers like an unfinished thought."
– Poet

 

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I dreamed I was inside a bulb— a cathedral of filament and glass— not dead not born….. but shumming**. Glass walls curved like time sealed but translucent my fingers curled around voltage like a secret God was transcending. The socket hummed a lullaby of static. Every breath of mine made sparks the air electric with grief and longing. I saw myself outside the bulb in a room wallpapered with eyes— each iris twitching like a seismograph. They watched as I shimmered like an angel in a jar of fire as if I were proof of something too holy or too hideous to name. The room beyond glistened with wallpapered surveillance— each gaze a blink each blink a test of identity a hymn of entropy and wonder. I touched the glass— cool as frozen memory thin as a promise— and the world on the other side shuddered like a dream woken too soon My thoughts turned tungsten— spiraled stubborn resisting the spark of enlightenment or extinction I spoke and the words bent back like boomerangs buzzing with static regret A child approached barefoot real impossibly tender….. She looked like someone I might have loved if time had taken pity. She placed her palm on the bulb— her skin against my sorrow the warmth of it startling as mercy a forgiveness. “Why are you in there?” she asked or perhaps thought— her voice the color of candlelight. I tried to answer but my vocal cords was hardwired my tongue a fuse My words came back distorted looped charred as if language were combustible. For a moment I flickered between purpose and obliteration Then the ceiling cracked open like a wound and light poured down— not to reveal like revelation like judgment— to burn away the questions And I understood— not everything illuminated is meant to be seen not all vision is freedom….. Some truths are meant to flicker fragile and holy inside the bulb of the soul unspoken unchosen alive. ================ **Shumming: Shimmering Humming

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Date: 5/12/2025 11:58:00 AM
Such a deep poem, Daniel. So raw it definitely tells the truth. I love the glass bulb metaphor, and how you used it throughout. Wonderful piece.
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Date: 5/12/2025 11:20:00 AM
WOW!!! What a wonderful quote, write, story and picture you have here. Great Ending... Have a lovely day/week writing away............
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Date: 5/12/2025 11:20:00 AM
Thank you for providing a definition of shumming. Reading it, I knew I'd need to look it up. I love the quote as much as the poem, both are deep, profound and shine with your talent. The read was so engaging that I startled when someone called my name (son), forgot where I was. Your poem took me away, like Calgon, but better ... CayCay
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Date: 5/12/2025 11:10:00 AM
Dear Daniel, this is an exceptional poem that addresses issues of loneliness, self-awareness, and the quest for individuality within the limits of society's expectations. Your sense of being inside a light bulb seems to act as a metaphor for feeling caged and inspected. The engagement with the kid represents purity and a need for connection, yet the investigation of light and darkness implies the complexities of truth and understanding. Finally, the poem considers the essence of life, the fragility of identity, and the deep truths that stay unspoken. Not sure if my analysis is correct, but that's how I interpret it.
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Date: 5/12/2025 7:04:00 AM
Well, I read this a few times and still trying to figure it all out. Like much of your poetry it seems to be exploring existential questions of time, space, worth (or unworth), life, death, relevance. The child is an interesting metaphor. Still working on that one. Fascinating poetry
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Date: 5/12/2025 7:23:00 AM
Good Morning, Tom, Thanks for being the first one to respond. It certainly is very existential and before I lay out the full meaning, I am always curious to see how others interpret lines in the poem. My hint: It is showing the complex inner world that exists before manifestation, the potential and actual transformation. (Sorry, it is a little like the Beatles writing Lucy in the Sky...) LOL! Spring Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

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