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John G. Lawless
©5/24/2023

I shed the shackles of societal scrutiny Dared to color the Pumpkin purple Finding that one must weigh such actions On the scale of consequences Developed a “cloak of invisibility” Muted and masked my reality Sharpened the spearhead of a N0. 2 pencil Mounted up, lowered my shield, and fled Leaving a trail of “double entendre” A myriad of menacing metaphor The howl of “Limerickian” lunacy A sonorous tone of truth Yet still I bear the shackle scars Soft fears that linger in a being Longing to dull my stinging spearhead Erase the Pumpkin's purple smile

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Date: 5/30/2023 12:51:00 PM
Ahh missed this - congratulations :)
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Date: 5/28/2023 6:25:00 AM
You are a poet with a unique style... profound and esoteric. I admire your talent. I can never write a poem of this style. Congratulations John on your POTD
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Date: 5/28/2023 4:35:00 AM
I love purple. Congrats on POTD. God bless you, Love, Gina
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Date: 5/26/2023 11:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.
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Date: 5/26/2023 8:22:00 PM
Please don't "Erase the Pumpkin's purple smile". I simply love it, because *purple* is one of my favorite colors. Dare to be different, it's wonderful in every way. You've created a Masterpiece, John. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. Keep smiling, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 5/26/2023 4:20:00 PM
Nice one John....congrats on POTD!
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Date: 5/26/2023 3:39:00 PM
Hey, Lawless! Ring the chimes! Congratulations, on the POTD. Pangie
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Date: 5/26/2023 3:15:00 PM
Love the imagery of a purple pumpkin, brave to see it a different way, even with the consequence - also congratulations on getting POTD~
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Date: 5/26/2023 12:26:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD, John.
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Date: 5/26/2023 10:54:00 AM
I think I'm kind of with Daniel on this one, John. But I do rather like the imagery of "purple pumpkins". Congrats on POTD.
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Date: 5/26/2023 10:19:00 AM
Congratulations, John, on honour of POTD. Enjoyed your creative poem!
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Date: 5/26/2023 7:56:00 AM
This is pretty twisted, John. LOL Congratulations on POTD honors:)
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Date: 5/26/2023 7:22:00 AM
Congratulations for POTD :)
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Date: 5/26/2023 7:22:00 AM
Just be yourself, all the other stuff is really just fluff. Nice introspective poetry, John. Thanks for sharing your thoughts through poetry. Bill
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Date: 5/26/2023 6:02:00 AM
- What a lovely poem... congratulations on yours p.o.t.d., John :) -
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Date: 5/26/2023 6:00:00 AM
John, congratulations on your POTD honors! Purple pumpkins are just fine with me!!! enjoy your day and your individualism !!!
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Date: 5/26/2023 5:07:00 AM
John, congratulations on your POTD! It speaks to the imagination secretly hiding in us. Love it. Paulette
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Date: 5/26/2023 4:40:00 AM
John, an enjoyable poem, congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 5/26/2023 4:22:00 AM
So glad you are POTD! perfect! Congratulations! You know I love it!
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Date: 5/26/2023 3:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD honor, John: Excellent musing. SuZ
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Date: 5/26/2023 1:29:00 AM
I’ll keep you supplied with lead if you keep writing with shackles off. A purple pumpkin need not wear a smile, but he must write. Sorry I missed this one but great to see it as potd!
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Date: 5/26/2023 12:36:00 AM
Congratulations John for POTD!! Debx
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Date: 5/25/2023 4:20:00 AM
What a poem should be. Love the mystery and allure of the purple pumpkin intruding upon late Spring. A fave for me!!!
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Date: 5/24/2023 10:46:00 PM
This is interesting John
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Date: 5/24/2023 9:47:00 PM
Quite a masterpiece John...can well understand why a purple pumpkin would topple the world order, such subversion is unforgivable. Very clever..
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