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Purple Cues In Orchid Motifs


Glorious hues arise from halo of morning sky
As dreamy eyes take me on a wondrous ride
Where cottony clouds scatter layers of purple
Adorning with shades of heliotrope flowers.

On my ride I visualize a celestial place on earth
Hearing fairy tales from fabled views unfolding,
And I ask my yawning bushes to vacate at once
So I can plant my lilac garden in sunrise colors.

Mesmerized by purple cues in orchid motifs
My day traversed gaily in enchanting overtones,
When clouds spewing gray darkened my show
Blocking twilight from glistening reddish glow.

Having lost sunrise, I hang on to sinking sunset
Assured by its scenic prowess I build my place
Near the lone lamp on street that is yet to be lit
Yearning for vistas of my daydream to repeat.

My place now occupies best of both worlds
Rising with mornings and setting with evenings,
Mimicking splendid hues of evocative contexts
Adoring fervent daybreaks and dreamy sunsets.

February 15, 2018
First Place:Sunrise and sunset contest by Silent One
Also placed first in ultimate 2018 contest by Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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May Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 1:30 PM
Beautifully penned Vijay....
George Avatar
April 4, 2023 at 7:10 AM
Your rambling through 'fervent daybreaks and dreamy sunsets' bring before us a splendid array of colors and we are lost in the spell of your enchanting images ! A great journey and we too enjoy the scenic prowess of the setting sun. Simply gorgeous....
Raven Avatar
December 23, 2018 at 11:01 AM
Hi Vijay, much belated congratulations o this exceptional write being a top winner in Silent's contest. This one just takes me away on a beautiful journey. Your coloured palette of words does sing such beautiful imagery. This was such a beautiful journey to take on this early evening. A fave. Have a wonderful Sunday. your friend always....Mike.
Gauthier Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 2:35 PM
Lovely, Vijay. Congrats on your top win.
Breedt Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 12:54 AM
Hi Vijay, you old stalwart friend you. Very colourful write about my favourite times of day. Thanks for your solidarity on mine.
Pandit Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 5:39 AM
Many thanks, Jannie.
Tripp Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 7:11 PM
Congratulations, Vijay. Amazing write.
Pandit Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 5:38 AM
Thank you Rhoda.
Duet Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 10:30 PM
What a beauty, Vijay! You appealed to my artistic heart and now I feel like I should paint a beautiful sunrise or sunset. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.
Pandit Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 7:52 AM
Thank you Carole.
Sands Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 5:44 PM
Congratulations for this beautiful poem Vijay :)
Pandit Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 7:51 AM
Thank you Heidi.
Dietrich Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 12:03 PM
Glad to see this one got a good placement, Vijay. Congratulations to you.
Pandit Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 7:51 AM
Thank you Andrea.
Poteet Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 8:15 AM
I like your title lines best of all, "Mesmerized by purple cues in orchid motifs / My day traversed gaily in enchanting overtones," Congratulations, Vijay on a marvelous write and a great placement.
Pandit Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 7:51 AM
Thank you RAP.
Gupta Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 10:25 PM
Congratulations on your first place for this beautiful poem ...
Pandit Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 7:50 AM
Thank you Probir.
Ashley Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 7:25 PM
Returning with congratulations Vijay on your fantastic first place win with your beautifully expressive poem.. ~Susan
Pandit Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 7:50 AM
Thank you Susan.
Dietrich Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 7:05 PM
You did a very lovely job here, Vijay. I hope you won big with this one. I see it's on the list. BIG congrats.
Pandit Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 7:50 AM
Thank you Andrea.
Haight Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 6:58 PM
Such lovely imagery in your poem, Vijay! Congratulations on your First Place win. Sandra :)
Pandit Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 7:49 AM
Thank you Sandra.
Leiser Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 4:23 PM
Very beautiful, Vijay! Loved your imagery on both the sunrise and sunset! Congrats on your well deserved win :)
Pandit Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 7:49 AM
Thank you Laura.
Sietesantos Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 12:09 PM
Swinging back to offer HUGE Congrats to you, dear Vijay! Well done ! Hugs. Pandita
Pandit Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 7:48 AM
Thank you Pandita.
Andresen Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 12:08 PM
- Congratulations, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 7:48 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise.
One Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 12:07 PM
A poem with great imagery Vijay.. congratulations on your first place in the contest..
Pandit Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 7:48 AM
Thank you Silent One.
Sietesantos Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 4:24 PM
What an amazingly beautiful piece, dear Vijay! I love the incredible imagery you so artfully employed and I am sure you will earn high marks with this write! Well done, my friend! Hugs. Pandita
Pandit Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 7:25 PM
Enjoyed reading your comments..many thanks Pandita.
Murray Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 2:28 PM
Intoxicating imagery Vijay.
Pandit Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 7:24 PM
Thank you Jean.
Ashley Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 9:36 AM
With vivid imagery and emotion you have created a beautiful poem Vijay. Lovely flowing lines elevates your write to beyond the colorful skies. Best wishes for a win! ~Susan
Pandit Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 1:50 PM
Enjoyed reading your comments Susan..many thanks.
Williams Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 7:26 AM
A soft impressive picture to go with a magnificent description of the setting that you have manifested your poem in. All the best for your entry in the contest. A FAVE from me ...Maria
Pandit Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 1:50 PM
Thank you Andrea--enjoyed reading your comments.
Trifiatis Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 6:11 AM
Impressive painting with astonishing expressions my friend, Vijay! Good luck!
Pandit Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 6:25 AM
Appreciate you comments Demetrios..many thanks.
Swartz Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 9:20 PM
You just keep getting better and better Vijay. Your poems are truly magnificent paintings.
Pandit Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 6:22 AM
Thank you James..appreciate your comments.
Smith Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 1:58 PM
Such a beautiful picture you paint Vijay, well done...
Pandit Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 8:46 PM
Thank you Charlie.
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