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Glorious hues arise from halo of morning sky As dreamy eyes take me on a wondrous ride Where cottony clouds scatter layers of purple Adorning with shades of heliotrope flowers. On my ride I visualize a celestial place on earth Hearing fairy tales from fabled views unfolding, And I ask my yawning bushes to vacate at once So I can plant my lilac garden in sunrise colors. Mesmerized by purple cues in orchid motifs My day traversed gaily in enchanting overtones, When clouds spewing gray darkened my show Blocking twilight from glistening reddish glow. Having lost sunrise, I hang on to sinking sunset Assured by its scenic prowess I build my place Near the lone lamp on street that is yet to be lit Yearning for vistas of my daydream to repeat. My place now occupies best of both worlds Rising with mornings and setting with evenings, Mimicking splendid hues of evocative contexts Adoring fervent daybreaks and dreamy sunsets. February 15, 2018 First Place:Sunrise and sunset contest by Silent One Also placed first in ultimate 2018 contest by Brian Strand

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Date: 8/26/2023 1:30:00 PM
Beautifully penned Vijay....
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Date: 4/4/2023 7:10:00 AM
Your rambling through 'fervent daybreaks and dreamy sunsets' bring before us a splendid array of colors and we are lost in the spell of your enchanting images ! A great journey and we too enjoy the scenic prowess of the setting sun. Simply gorgeous....
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Date: 12/23/2018 11:01:00 AM
Hi Vijay, much belated congratulations o this exceptional write being a top winner in Silent's contest. This one just takes me away on a beautiful journey. Your coloured palette of words does sing such beautiful imagery. This was such a beautiful journey to take on this early evening. A fave. Have a wonderful Sunday. your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 4/9/2018 2:35:00 PM
Lovely, Vijay. Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 3/13/2018 12:54:00 AM
Hi Vijay, you old stalwart friend you. Very colourful write about my favourite times of day. Thanks for your solidarity on mine.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/13/2018 5:39:00 AM
Many thanks, Jannie.
Date: 2/20/2018 7:11:00 PM
Congratulations, Vijay. Amazing write.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/13/2018 5:38:00 AM
Thank you Rhoda.
Date: 2/19/2018 10:30:00 PM
What a beauty, Vijay! You appealed to my artistic heart and now I feel like I should paint a beautiful sunrise or sunset. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/20/2018 7:52:00 AM
Thank you Carole.
Date: 2/19/2018 5:44:00 PM
Congratulations for this beautiful poem Vijay :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/20/2018 7:51:00 AM
Thank you Heidi.
Date: 2/19/2018 12:03:00 PM
Glad to see this one got a good placement, Vijay. Congratulations to you.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/20/2018 7:51:00 AM
Thank you Andrea.
Date: 2/19/2018 8:15:00 AM
I like your title lines best of all, "Mesmerized by purple cues in orchid motifs / My day traversed gaily in enchanting overtones," Congratulations, Vijay on a marvelous write and a great placement.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/20/2018 7:51:00 AM
Thank you RAP.
Date: 2/18/2018 10:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place for this beautiful poem ...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/20/2018 7:50:00 AM
Thank you Probir.
Date: 2/18/2018 7:25:00 PM
Returning with congratulations Vijay on your fantastic first place win with your beautifully expressive poem.. ~Susan
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/20/2018 7:50:00 AM
Thank you Susan.
Date: 2/18/2018 7:05:00 PM
You did a very lovely job here, Vijay. I hope you won big with this one. I see it's on the list. BIG congrats.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/20/2018 7:50:00 AM
Thank you Andrea.
Date: 2/18/2018 6:58:00 PM
Such lovely imagery in your poem, Vijay! Congratulations on your First Place win. Sandra :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/20/2018 7:49:00 AM
Thank you Sandra.
Date: 2/18/2018 4:23:00 PM
Very beautiful, Vijay! Loved your imagery on both the sunrise and sunset! Congrats on your well deserved win :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/20/2018 7:49:00 AM
Thank you Laura.
Date: 2/18/2018 12:09:00 PM
Swinging back to offer HUGE Congrats to you, dear Vijay! Well done ! Hugs. Pandita
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/20/2018 7:48:00 AM
Thank you Pandita.
Date: 2/18/2018 12:08:00 PM
- Congratulations, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/20/2018 7:48:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise.
Date: 2/18/2018 12:07:00 PM
A poem with great imagery Vijay.. congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/20/2018 7:48:00 AM
Thank you Silent One.
Date: 2/17/2018 4:24:00 PM
What an amazingly beautiful piece, dear Vijay! I love the incredible imagery you so artfully employed and I am sure you will earn high marks with this write! Well done, my friend! Hugs. Pandita
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/17/2018 7:25:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your comments..many thanks Pandita.
Date: 2/17/2018 2:28:00 PM
Intoxicating imagery Vijay.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/17/2018 7:24:00 PM
Thank you Jean.
Date: 2/17/2018 9:36:00 AM
With vivid imagery and emotion you have created a beautiful poem Vijay. Lovely flowing lines elevates your write to beyond the colorful skies. Best wishes for a win! ~Susan
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/17/2018 1:50:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your comments Susan..many thanks.
Date: 2/17/2018 7:26:00 AM
A soft impressive picture to go with a magnificent description of the setting that you have manifested your poem in. All the best for your entry in the contest. A FAVE from me ...Maria
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/17/2018 1:50:00 PM
Thank you Andrea--enjoyed reading your comments.
Date: 2/17/2018 6:11:00 AM
Impressive painting with astonishing expressions my friend, Vijay! Good luck!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/17/2018 6:25:00 AM
Appreciate you comments Demetrios..many thanks.
Date: 2/16/2018 9:20:00 PM
You just keep getting better and better Vijay. Your poems are truly magnificent paintings.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/17/2018 6:22:00 AM
Thank you James..appreciate your comments.
Date: 2/16/2018 1:58:00 PM
Such a beautiful picture you paint Vijay, well done...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/16/2018 8:46:00 PM
Thank you Charlie.
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