Purple

Purple sky sunrise On quiet beach way up high, look Down on purple sand

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

L'Nass Shango

Date: 12/7/2009 9:55:00 PM

A purple poem in my purple hand ... giving me purple to understand ... a royal color code for great

Daver Austin

Date: 11/22/2009 7:41:00 AM

Great image! Love, daver

James Fraser

Date: 11/22/2009 7:14:00 AM

A sight that i would love to witness >> kool Haiku Sara >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/21/2009 5:14:00 PM

And Purple is my favorite color and this is an awesome write.. so enjoyed.. luv all your haiku poetry the best, Sara, its so beautiful to read... thankxxx for your comments on my newest posting tonight.. sometimes we all have to look inside .. like spring housecleaning.. blessings ... luv ... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

P Sheart

Date: 11/21/2009 3:01:00 PM

Breathtaking visual in this beautiful Haiku Sara! Love Light Patty

Jared Pickett

Date: 11/21/2009 11:09:00 AM

I agree with Carolyn. I too have lived in Florida and your description is on point.... Wonderful poem....:JP}

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/21/2009 6:46:00 AM

This colorful haiku reminds me of the sunrise service on the beach here in Florida. The colors really do appear to reflect off the sand as well as the faces of those who worship. Very nice! Love, Carolyn

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 11/21/2009 4:55:00 AM

sure does put me there, Sara