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Purgatory's Fire

I plunged my soul in purgatory’s fire To cleanse my mind of my unchaste desire Sin set aflame in burning flares of heat From being damned, the evil one to cheat As hungry flames lapped at my weakened form I lay prostrate in unabated storm Sweet images of you flashed through my mind The blazing tongues these images did find Excruciating pain the fires brought Betrayed by you, this pain did seem as naught Infernal hands touched where your lips had kissed With vengeance to pursue…the flames just hissed The inner sanctum where with me you’d merged Strong wrathful hands of heat each trace now purged My lips which had your body tasted sweet A flare of retribution did them greet Within an inch of life, tormented sore Unable to endure a minute more Of fiery furnace, I was then set free Was nearly blind, and yet your face I see The mem’ries deluge now in cooling stream Revived, you are, in every kiss and dream Your image was not seared away from mind A lustful craving heat in me you’ll find The cleansing that I sought was not be You live and breathe inside the heart of me And paradise awaits me in your kiss Consume with passion now, take me to bliss Eileen Manassian Ghali Just a disclaimer here....I DO NOT believe in purgatory, nor in an everlasting hell. This is just poetic license....Purgatory is supposed to be a place where you are purified of sin on your way to heaven. Unfortunately, being purged from thoughts of desire for her loved one did not work in this case.

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Date: 2/5/2014 6:34:00 AM
I identified with this piece, and I agree with Richard: good imagery. I've written about similar things in my own work so I totally related to what you are conveying here. Kudos! Enjoyed this :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/5/2014 10:20:00 AM
Thanks, Chan. I value your opinion. Please...feel free to give pointers anytime....I'd love to improve....
Date: 1/19/2014 9:14:00 AM
Wow, very powerful imagery. Last stanza add a to befor be. Other than that small typo this is beyond brilliant. I mezmorized from beginning to end. On to the next.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/19/2014 10:19:00 AM
We are heading to Penticton today so unfortunately won't be able to call in. Say hi to Fj and Drake for me.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/19/2014 10:17:00 AM
Busy day at work and we went out to see the Wolf of Wall Street so got in late.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/19/2014 9:16:00 AM
RICHARD........RICHARD........where you been? I've missed you. I listened to your show with Drake today...bits of it...Listen listen....tonight is another show....SOON...Are you going to call in? I will....My voice is horrible....getting over a chest infection, but.......who cares???? Thanks for having my back on that typo thingy....WILL CHECK!
Date: 1/18/2014 4:31:00 PM
- A wonderful poem Eileen - (do not tell anyone .... but, the best I've read today :) - Have a enjoyable weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/18/2014 1:48:00 PM
Hi Eileen, Some really good stuff here... Ken
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/18/2014 3:47:00 PM
;-) Thanks a million, Ken.
Date: 1/18/2014 12:33:00 PM
Eileen, if this is not your best work so far, then it certainly ranks up their among the top ten.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/18/2014 12:35:00 PM
Robert....this is such a lovely post. Thanks EVER so much for sharing your opinion with me. I do appreciate your honesty. I know you mean what you say. THANKS! :)

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