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Pure Circumstance

God knows each heart that walks the streets, and then,     
each sense of guilt caught up in false pretense.                    
How not to spend a tear at their expense 
How do we not reflect what might have been 
if circumstance had never been a friend?   
If fate or chance might change the future, hence?  
   
Their shoulders hunched, against cruel wind, intense.      
Poor scavengers, who some call useless men         
will migrate streets, in hopes for scraps of food.     
A crumb, a nickel, dime, a place to find                      
A shelter dry, when frost of night is nigh.
    
And now I travel home, perhaps to brood                                      
on cruelty of life that bodes unkind 
to some.      I cannot eat,...tonight I cry. 



~




5/5/14 
Miltonic Sonnet: For Contest 
Resubmitted for Brian Strand's Contest:  Mid August Premiere 8/11/18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Gentry Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 7:51 PM
Congratulations on your win. A fav for me. Well done!
Richards Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 5:28 PM
Thank you very much Susan !! So appreciated!
Roper Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 7:34 PM
Fantastic imagery, Carrie,and so sad , but true.. I have a sister and her husband living out of a car with their grandchild.. and that is the way they want it.. But she is also has Schizophrenia. :( congratulations on an excellent win! Hugs Eve
Richards Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 5:27 PM
Dear Eve...It makes me very sad to know that you have first hand knowledge of such "circumstance of life". I am so very sorry. Thank you for your kind appreciation of my poem, and take heart that people really do care :)
Gauthier Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 9:13 PM
A lovely poem, Carrie. Superbly done.
Richards Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 5:28 PM
Thank you for your kind words, Line!
Kendrick Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 6:08 PM
Congrats. Sara
Devonshire Avatar
May 14, 2014 at 6:08 AM
Dear Carrie, Indeed, God knows what is in our hearts and sometimes we feel sympathy for those who have strayed from His path. It saddens me to think of the "scavengers" who have to fight to survive in a world of greed. Awesome poem from a perfectionist! Congratulations, Carolyn
Johnson Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 11:39 PM
There is so much sadness and none of us can carry all of their burdens. We each just have to do our best for those whom we can help.. Great job. Love, Joyce.
Dietrich Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 7:49 PM
you did a fantastic job, Carrie and dwells on a much more relevant social issue than mine does. I will have to see later what placement you got. I am sure this was quite a winner.
Guzzi Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 7:41 PM
Bang up ending there Carrie, I opened my home to people in need twice and formed wonderful lasting relationships. people are just so frightened of each other now. I'm not frightened of people ;) [water yes LOL people NO] Congrad's on your win Light & Love
Jerden Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 3:24 PM
Prequel to The Hunger Games... Great poem Carrie. Congratulations!
Gibson Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 3:01 PM
Congratulations, Carrie!
Kendrick Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 1:08 PM
Excellent form..Way to g..Sara
George   Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 12:11 PM
Ah!!! I see it all the time on the street of Toronto. It has the same effect on me, Carrie. Heartfelt sonnet! Congrat's on your win. Lainie
Lee Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 9:23 AM
Yes, wonderfully done! Congratulations on your win, Carrie!
Callus Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 9:17 AM
Deep and emotional write that merited a fine win...congrats, Carrie! // paul
A. Sharma Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 9:01 AM
Wonderful write Carrie ! Congrats on ur great win !
Nance Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 6:39 AM
I want to cry to. sometimes situations are tough, but you are right God knows each heart. Good luck in the contest Carrie :)
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