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Pure Thoughts On Nature

PURE THOUGHTS ON NATURE Water moulds rock, rock resists : There is no winner, no loser at all. Mother birds feed babies : this is amoral. Neither bad nor good ; simply what exists. Men are attracted to women - that’s how it was meant; Air is beautiful to breathe; water to drink; Lions eat gazelles. All this is amoral, despite what we think. Death comes to all in the end : not a moral event. Poverty in the midst of plenty doesn’t exist in nature; Such things are not natural : are immoral. They exist only in man’s realm, as also all The haters, murderers, and lusty debauchers. Turn away a beggar - not enough money for your self? Pure nature’s made impure by our weakness in the head. Someone* said “ A small bird will drop frozen dead From a bough without ever having felt sorry for itself.” It is immoral to see orphans and not want to foster The homeless, unloved, ignored, or despised. We may think they are failures, while we are prized, But triumph and disaster are unnatural imposters. ** …………………………………………. NOTES * Actually, the great novelist and poet D. H. Lawrence ** From R. Kipling’s poem “ IF ” . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Entered in John Freeman’s Contest “Pure Thoughts On Nature”

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Date: 8/4/2011 7:20:00 PM
Congrats on your super win..Sara
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Date: 8/4/2011 5:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!!!!!!A wonderful poem.---Lori
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Date: 8/4/2011 1:08:00 PM
Sydney, My man, Loved it , right on que, congratulations on your worthy poem's presentation. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/4/2011 9:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Pure Thoughts On Nature" contest Syd. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/4/2011 12:08:00 AM
Congrats on your 1st place win Syd. Great write on what is moral and immoral. Love, Glenna
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Date: 8/3/2011 8:20:00 PM
Such a sterling write very true and very provacative. Congrad's on your big win! Light & Love
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Date: 8/3/2011 6:47:00 PM
tops for you, syd... happy to share the spot with you; my rhymes workes too, told ay! lol.. cheery congrats on your splendid win! : ) huggs!
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Date: 8/3/2011 6:46:00 PM
Congrats on a super first place win in John's contest .. stunning..Syd...
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Date: 8/3/2011 3:43:00 PM
Deeply thoughtful, and with great wisdom, and insight. There is a lesson in all nature. Well done, Syd!!
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Sidney Beck
Date: 8/3/2011 4:41:00 PM
Thanks a lot for your kind words Carrie...I cannot claim to be full of wisdom....it simply seems like common sense to me... best wishes Syd
Date: 7/29/2011 2:22:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your poetry today Syd. It was a pleasure to read and the best to you in the contest. Have a wonderful weekend and keep your pen flowing. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/29/2011 12:57:00 PM
A profound write here...enjoyed.Best wishes.
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