Puppets

I was set upon a wooden box
With strings fastened to my hands and feet
It seems she promised to make me dance
With her skillful hands I'd feel the beat

The music, I could hear really well
Sadly I was unable to move
That would change according to her plan
Her music had a sinister groove

My knees she crushed with a big hammer
All my other joints broken with such glee
It seems she needed another puppet
Why I wonder did it have to be me

When I screamed she skillfully broke my jaw
Then each finger crushed in her metal vice
She laughed and said, "Oh don't you worry,
I have stored up a whole chest of ice!"

Then she came close, to look in my eyes
Telling me that she much preferred green
Sadly blue was not her color of choice
She wanted eyes that exuded mean

I watched her return, with two glass eyes
And a sharp knife in the palm of her hand
As she got close, I gave her a head butt
she dropped to the floor like a bag of sand

On the very spot where her hammer rested
Thankfully the claw pointed up in the air
The crack of her skull was a lovely sound
I took much pleasure in her lifeless stare

Now there is no one to pull my strings
I sit here waiting with my puppet friends
The room is quiet none of us can speak
We all look like babies, wearing depends!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Walker  Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 10:17 PM
Well done Richard... Enjoyed! Verlena
Widjanarko Avatar
December 31, 2014 at 10:05 AM
I loved the imagination here! Way to go Rick! A little bit horror for me lol, wishing you a very happy new year!! In my place still 1 hour to go. You refreshed my day Rick after the depressing days for the plane crash news on TV. Hug. Yanny.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 31, 2014 at 10:14 AM
Hugs back Yanny!
Yvonne Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 7:16 PM
Very creative, good for you Richard. Great exploration, bonus, it worked!
Lamoureux Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 8:40 AM
I guess it wasn't to the Judge's liking but for me it works.
Horsman Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 5:35 AM
Hi Richard Brilliant poetry, i read this kinda different, relate it to the human race,,thanks for the correction to my poem the other week i appreciated it...happy holiday...
Lamoureux Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 7:53 AM
Thanks Harry, I'm pleased you like it.
Eastman Avatar
December 24, 2014 at 10:53 AM
UH... Kinda sad... Steven King- ish... I think Dragon and I are gonna hide for a while...
Lamoureux Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 7:52 AM
No need to hide, the wicked witch is gone!
Dietrich Avatar
December 23, 2014 at 5:08 PM
oh my gosh, I don't know whether to laugh or not but that last line is hilarious, Richard!! This is a really good sinister one, so even though i love the hilarity of the last line, i suggest you change it in keeping with that great creepy tone of the poem. truly beautifully sinister!!!
Lamoureux Avatar
December 23, 2014 at 9:22 PM
Nope the last line is there to create a bit of surprise. The crazy lady who was collecting them wanted to keep it easy to clean up her human puppets.
Nance Avatar
December 22, 2014 at 3:23 PM
Wow, that was creepy, dark, sinister, intriguing, and I LOVED IT. Wonderful and unique. I never know what to expect when I read you, and that is why I enjoy you so much :) !
Lamoureux Avatar
December 23, 2014 at 9:23 PM
Thanks Casarah, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Kiser Avatar
December 22, 2014 at 1:45 PM
Did Punch and Judy party too much with Chucky? Eerie, chilling, but well done.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 23, 2014 at 9:24 PM
Thanks M.L.
Sergi Avatar
December 22, 2014 at 1:03 PM
Hi Richard: A beautifully crafted poem not unlike CHUCKY (HAHA) Happy Holiday, Friend Check out my email.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 23, 2014 at 9:26 PM
In the case of this one the puppets are the victims. Merry Christmas to you a well Ralph.
Allison Avatar
December 22, 2014 at 12:43 AM
I found the imagery quite chilling Richard - great deep dark descriptive write - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
Lamoureux Avatar
December 22, 2014 at 8:57 AM
Thanks for the luck and the hug.
Petersen Potter Avatar
December 21, 2014 at 11:29 PM
Very brilliant pen Richard my dear Friend! Truly enjoyed your artistic puppet making poem. A solid 7 for you! I love your poem enchanting rhymes and all amazing piece! Wish you and tour family a very Merry Christma! :) Love and hugs! Xxxx D.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 22, 2014 at 8:58 AM
Thanks for the 7, Merry Christmas and a hug back to you.
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