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Pumpkin Cake

There once was a girl from Arizona Who could only fit in a kimona She vowed to lose some weight But loved all kinds of cake Even drawn by pumpkin cake's aroma She vowed that she would be stronger Would wear kimonos no longer With cotton up her nose From the table arose Now in leggins she does saunter Sponsor: Gwendolin R. Contest:A Limerick In My Pocket

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Date: 6/15/2014 10:51:00 PM
Sara This is a creative and silly write full of fun and imagination. Made me smile. Thank you for the nice comment on my ABC poem.
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Date: 1/28/2013 10:57:00 PM
once again here to read this .... enjoy your wonderful creativity in this simple theme...
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Date: 1/18/2013 7:28:00 PM
The cotton up the nose trick really worked well for the girl in your limerick!! Such a fun entertaining entry...All limericks should be like this one, Sara!! Creative genius! Congrats. gwendolen
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Date: 1/18/2013 3:17:00 PM
Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 1/17/2013 11:26:00 PM
yours is a gas, Sara!!! congrats!
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Date: 1/15/2013 10:38:00 AM
Very nice Limerick here Sara.Congrats on your win.
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Date: 1/15/2013 8:38:00 AM
Good morning Sara, :-) ~ congratulations with the awesome win in Rix's "A Limerick in My Pocket Contest " contest. xox~pd
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Date: 1/15/2013 7:37:00 AM
Congratulations Sara, a nice chuckle with these. xx
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Date: 1/10/2013 8:35:00 AM
This is nice Sara; I like it. Around Thanksgiving - I love to have some pumpkin cake. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 1/10/2013 4:48:00 AM
For a super limerick Sara ...... who can resist delicious cakes. - It is a winning poem, good luck. - - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/9/2013 10:37:00 PM
Nice little double limerick. Just one item needs correction: "loose" should be "lose". What you have there now means running around freely or not tightened.
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Date: 1/9/2013 7:06:00 AM
This Is a write that sort of got sparse Toward the end Sara; or i'm guessing That the dieter did.. L O L)) enjoyed My visit here.." Joe..)
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Date: 1/8/2013 7:01:00 PM
Hmm... I like pumpkin cake as well as this poem. Good limerick you have here
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Date: 1/7/2013 11:10:00 PM
Lol, so that's how she diets? Enjoyed, Sara. Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 1/7/2013 5:54:00 PM
VERY CLEVER, Sara. I love the wit of this one!!!
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Date: 1/7/2013 1:34:00 PM
This is such a brilliant and wondrous write my friend! I really loved reading this delightful and enlightening poem this afternoon! You have presented a great pair of Limericks Sara, fantastic poems! Awesome Work!!
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Date: 1/7/2013 12:49:00 PM
: )Now you've made me want a taste of pumpkin cake, Sara! Enjoyed your Limerick! Love, Annalise
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Date: 1/7/2013 9:17:00 AM
Thank you for the… cake, Sara, it’s delicious! Lovely limerick, enjoyed a lot!
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Date: 1/7/2013 8:46:00 AM
Sara a nice limerick. Ii loved "With cotton up her nose" clever. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 1/7/2013 8:30:00 AM
Very nice Sara.Enjoyed this Limerick.Best wishes to you.
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