Sara Kendrick Poet Limerick

Pumpkin Cake

There once was a girl from Arizona
Who could only fit in a kimona
She vowed to lose some weight
But loved all kinds of cake
Even drawn by pumpkin cake's aroma  

She vowed that she would be stronger
Would wear kimonos no longer
With cotton up her nose
From the table arose
Now in leggins she does saunter


Sponsor: Gwendolin R.
Contest:A Limerick In My Pocket

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Robin Davis June 15, 2014 at 10:51 PM Sara This is a creative and silly write full of fun and imagination. Made me smile. Thank you for the nice comment on my ABC poem.

Mehnaz Veetil January 28, 2013 at 10:57 PM once again here to read this .... enjoy your wonderful creativity in this simple theme...

Gwendolen Song January 18, 2013 at 7:28 PM The cotton up the nose trick really worked well for the girl in your limerick!! Such a fun entertaining entry...All limericks should be like this one, Sara!! Creative genius! Congrats. gwendolen

Debbie Guzzi January 18, 2013 at 3:17 PM Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich January 17, 2013 at 11:26 PM yours is a gas, Sara!!! congrats!

Kash Poet January 15, 2013 at 10:38 AM Very nice Limerick here Sara.Congrats on your win.

Poet Destroyer A January 15, 2013 at 8:38 AM Good morning Sara, :-) ~ congratulations with the awesome win in Rix's "A Limerick in My Pocket Contest " contest. xox~pd

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl January 15, 2013 at 7:37 AM Congratulations Sara, a nice chuckle with these. xx

Lucilla Carrillo January 10, 2013 at 8:35 AM This is nice Sara; I like it. Around Thanksgiving - I love to have some pumpkin cake. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Anne-Lise Andresen January 10, 2013 at 4:48 AM For a super limerick Sara ...... who can resist delicious cakes. - It is a winning poem, good luck. - - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Robert Pettit January 9, 2013 at 10:37 PM Nice little double limerick. Just one item needs correction: "loose" should be "lose". What you have there now means running around freely or not tightened.

Joe Maverick January 9, 2013 at 7:06 AM This Is a write that sort of got sparse Toward the end Sara; or i'm guessing That the dieter did.. L O L)) enjoyed My visit here.." Joe..)

Honestly J.T. January 8, 2013 at 7:01 PM Hmm... I like pumpkin cake as well as this poem. Good limerick you have here

Toquyen Harrell January 7, 2013 at 11:10 PM Lol, so that's how she diets? Enjoyed, Sara. Good luck in the contest :)

Andrea Dietrich January 7, 2013 at 5:54 PM VERY CLEVER, Sara. I love the wit of this one!!!

Russell Sivey January 7, 2013 at 1:34 PM This is such a brilliant and wondrous write my friend! I really loved reading this delightful and enlightening poem this afternoon! You have presented a great pair of Limericks Sara, fantastic poems! Awesome Work!!

Audrey Haick January 7, 2013 at 12:49 PM : )Now you've made me want a taste of pumpkin cake, Sara! Enjoyed your Limerick! Love, Annalise

Demetrios Trifiatis January 7, 2013 at 9:17 AM Thank you for the… cake, Sara, it’s delicious! Lovely limerick, enjoyed a lot!

Connie Gildersleeve January 7, 2013 at 8:46 AM Sara a nice limerick. Ii loved "With cotton up her nose" clever. Warm Smiles, Connie

Kash Poet January 7, 2013 at 8:30 AM Very nice Sara.Enjoyed this Limerick.Best wishes to you.