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Puddles and Pirates

I can't play marbles in the rain - Or even spin my top. My skates will not roll in puddles, And it's too wet to hop. Ah, but I can be a pirate, And I can float my boat Up the river from New Orleans In my hurricane coat. Look yonder off the starboard side. Some say it's just tadpoles. But I know sharks when I see sharks - I pity some sad souls. I see a frigate northward bound Gold laden, riding low. I order all strip for action - We'll take her with one blow, I hear a call from the galley. Noon meal is getting cold. Golden frigate will have to wait The cook is sounding bold. I note position of the prize, And mark it on my map. I'll take it after my noon meal - And maybe after nap. 6-19-18 Foe Caren Krutsinger's contest Pure Childlike Fun and Enthusiasm

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Date: 7/29/2018 11:06:00 PM
I love everything about the rain. :) This is so cute. Hmm, maybe after a nap, I will find a puddle to splash in. I really would. :) Brandy
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Date: 7/1/2018 1:33:00 AM
This is indeed pure fun. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/1/2018 12:53:00 AM
Excellent journey into imagination, Larry. Congrats! Regards, Viv
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Date: 6/30/2018 4:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this creative fun story. Well done! :)
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Date: 6/30/2018 10:38:00 AM
Congratulations, Larry, on your great win.. Lovely story Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 6/19/2018 8:22:00 PM
So cute! <3
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 6/19/2018 10:34:00 PM
Thank you, Kim. Nice to hear from you!!

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