Ps - It's Poetry

PS - IT’S POETRY

Not merely words laid on a line
by blotting pens, by pencils fine
nor forms in perpetuity
teased with ambiguity.

It’s more, or less, depending on
the time of day, sunset or dawn
forever of the present mind
seeking what it cannot find.

For beauty is an “ugly” thing
a constant poets rarely bring
to broken lines of unfreed verse
to garbled words both sweet and terse

and yet it finds a way to bloom
across a page, throughout a room
crisp roses that will never wilt
petaled words - poetic quilt.

So write, erase, delete, reform
the present now become the norm
and you, the poet, must be free
‘cuz after all…. IT’S POETRY!

John G. Lawless
©12/8/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Marcum Wong Avatar
December 12, 2021 at 11:24 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful honor of POTD John. Blessings xxoo
Tor Avatar
December 12, 2021 at 3:42 PM
Wonderful and clever John Congratulations...
Y. Avatar
December 11, 2021 at 2:38 AM
WoW! John, This is so clever and creative. Good rhymes and content. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Have a great evening and weekend:-) Alexis
Kitchin Avatar
December 10, 2021 at 7:50 PM
John, a wonderfully creative gem, love the fourth stanza, congratulations on POTD!
Nicole Avatar
December 10, 2021 at 6:37 PM
"Broken lines" create a "Poetic quilt" I'm in complete awe... This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. Words seem to caress the page and then bloom. Yes, it's called *Poetry*. Congratulations John, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Logan Avatar
December 10, 2021 at 5:38 PM
What fantastic thoughts, John. Good call on today’s potd choice.
La France Avatar
December 10, 2021 at 4:48 PM
John, wonderful poem, I love it and a big congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Brown Avatar
December 10, 2021 at 2:51 PM
Congratulations,on POTD, You certainly have capture a poets heart.
Baker Avatar
December 10, 2021 at 11:51 AM
Congrats Mike, described to the max in a ball of wax. Told it like it is, in the poetry biz. Enjoyed the read. Bill
Gentile Avatar
December 10, 2021 at 11:21 AM
John, you've captures poetic essence perfectly! Congrats on your POTD honors!!
Strackbein Avatar
December 10, 2021 at 9:37 AM
Great poem! Congrats on POTD!!
Jayasankar Avatar
December 10, 2021 at 9:09 AM
The last line says it all, as many said below...loved it John. Excellent write... Hearty congratulations on your well deserved POTD honor... God bless... ~ Ani .
Wolf Avatar
December 10, 2021 at 8:52 AM
Ha ha! I see that I am now one with the algorithm. Predicting POTD will now be my (only) specialty. Congrats, John.
Peck Avatar
December 10, 2021 at 7:50 AM
Great poem! You might add we walk around with heads in the clouds :) Congratulations on POTD!
Strackbein Avatar
December 10, 2021 at 9:36 AM
and peaceful sleep disturbed by thoughts!
Ashley Avatar
December 10, 2021 at 7:43 AM
Dear John, congratulations for your poem’s wonderful and worthy recognition with POTD honors. Your elegant eloquence captures essence of the art and the poet.. and indeed, “the poet, must be free”! Enjoy the accolades you do richly deserve, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Sands Avatar
December 10, 2021 at 7:41 AM
Excellent POTD! Congratulations John :)
Roper Avatar
December 10, 2021 at 7:11 AM
IT’S POETRY!, Congratulations on POTD, John. Hugs Eve
Goldsmith Avatar
December 10, 2021 at 7:02 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. Your "PS - IT'S POETRY" is a "Wonderful" write. Love It. A Fav for me. Have a blessed day writing away...........................
Ray Choudhury Avatar
December 10, 2021 at 5:53 AM
Ahaa..such a beautiful, thought-provoking piece, John. Congratulations on your POTD. " ‘cuz after all…. IT’S POETRY!" - the ending line says it all! Warm wishes ~ Mala
Lane Avatar
December 10, 2021 at 5:09 AM
I see a few other poets recognized the value of your poem. I've now read it 4 times! Congratulations on it becoming the POTD, John.
Lane Avatar
December 10, 2021 at 6:38 AM
If you keep writing grand slam poetry, we'll keep cheering in the stands. Your pen sent this one over the wall.
Lawless Avatar
December 10, 2021 at 5:23 AM
Lin, I believe Gershon lobbied management on my poem's behalf. you read it four time...a poets "Grand Slam".
Kavanagh  Avatar
December 10, 2021 at 4:46 AM
Congratulations John on a barnstorming POTD capturing the very essence of the verse, for all poetry lovers, cheers David
Lawless Avatar
December 10, 2021 at 5:20 AM
oh to be a barnstorming brainstormer or a brainstorming barnstormer.......well anyway thank's David for stopping by to read and offer such a nice comment
Child Avatar
December 10, 2021 at 3:44 AM
Compliments on your POTD. Much enjoyed.
Lawless Avatar
December 10, 2021 at 5:18 AM
glad you enjoyed it and thanks for stopping to comment
Cunningham Avatar
December 10, 2021 at 1:00 AM
Quite a thought provoking piece John, congrats on POTD. Tom
Lawless Avatar
December 10, 2021 at 5:16 AM
Ah Tom, the provoking of "thought"....the secret goal of all poets (imho). thanks for stopping to read and comment
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 9, 2021 at 3:53 PM
Hello Lawless Hohn, yes write some words then errace them because they are the worng words. Keep ding this until you have found the right words. Enjoyyout evening my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 10, 2021 at 11:13 AM
Hello Lawless John, That is clever. You are welcome. enjoy yur day my friend.
Lawless Avatar
December 10, 2021 at 5:15 AM
the cut and paste poem...like a ransom note from a Jimmy Cagney gangster movie....Thanks for stopping by Darlene
Wolf Avatar
December 8, 2021 at 4:16 PM
Gosh, this is good. Rings so true, every stanza. It's my nomination for POTD on Dec. 09, John. Bravo. FAVE-time. :) gw
Lawless Avatar
December 9, 2021 at 5:27 AM
OK,ok, three favs in a row.....I shall have my pencil bronzed...well maybe not...the dog chewed it. Thanks for the nomination....I ACCEPT...."GERSHON'S POTD"
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