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Protection Program

Lets start a new protection program One for the heart instead of the grave I'll run away and change my name Where my heart will be guarded and safe My identity will be forever lost But I think it's a very small coast I'll make new friends and meet a new boy He wont even know that I'm damaged and coy He'll see in me that I'm nice and sweet He'll see in me that I'm classy and discreet He'll love me for the person I'm not But it's better than a love that is not This is too good and convenient for you And it seems way to good to be true Too bad it is, there is no program I'll just stay here unprotected with you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/4/2011 11:36:00 PM
Thank you. Don't know how I missed that.
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Date: 2/4/2011 11:28:00 PM
You have more simple wording and rhyming in this presentation. Your work has no trouble in delivering great descriptiveness and decent rhyming. Just one item needs correcting: The last word in the second line of the third verse is correctly spelled "discreet". Everything else looks fine.
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Sarah Sublett
Date: 7/31/2012 3:03:00 PM
Thank you for always giving me such good feedback, Robert!

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