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Proposed
I Recall Each moment When so in love On that day you asked me to be your bride I said "yes" with a smile wide as a mile Happy romance Hearts a-dance Upon Air.
24th August 2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Paul Callus
Date: 9/2/2021 6:04:00 AM
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THis is a perfect Double Tetractys, Belle. The theme goes so well with the prompt picture you chose. I look forward to seeing this poem on the winners' list. ~ Regards // paul
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/2/2021 9:52:00 AM
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Thank you Paul , I appreciate that very much… Belle
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/31/2021 5:07:00 PM
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absolutely delightful Belle:-) hugs Jan xx
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 8/31/2021 11:21:00 PM
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Thank you very much Jan. Hugs Belle :-) xx
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 8/31/2021 5:17:00 AM
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You did this really well. Lovely.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 8/31/2021 11:19:00 PM
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Thank you Rama, appreciated… Belle
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/29/2021 1:00:00 AM
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Best wishes, Belle! I loved your line..,hearts a dance! Panagiota
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 8/29/2021 8:39:00 AM
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Thank you Panagiota, may your heart be adance too… Belle
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/27/2021 7:59:00 PM
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So beautifully done, Belle. This is a fave for me.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 8/27/2021 8:03:00 PM
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Thank you Evelyn, very much appreciated… Belle
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/25/2021 10:13:00 AM
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Very nice Belle. Great one :)
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 8/25/2021 3:35:00 PM
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Thank you very much for that Heidi… Belle
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 8/25/2021 1:43:00 AM
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Wonderful way to tackle this contest. My imagination is low. Best for a win. Hugs.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 8/25/2021 3:35:00 PM
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Victor, knowing you your imagination won’t stay low for long. Thank you, Belle
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Date: 8/24/2021 7:28:00 PM
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No matter what happens, you'll always have those special memories, Belle. I like it so much. Blessings
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 8/25/2021 3:33:00 PM
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Thank you Lasaad, memory is such a precious gift, life would be nothing without it. Blessings in return… Belle
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 8/24/2021 6:14:00 PM
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Beautiful. I love it. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 8/24/2021 7:25:00 PM
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Thank you Gina, God bless you always too… love Belle
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Mohamed Omar
Date: 8/24/2021 3:37:00 PM
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moments forever
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 8/24/2021 4:39:00 PM
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Forever etched on your heart. Thank you Mohamed… Belle
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/24/2021 3:30:00 PM
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You never forget those moments Belle, they stay with you forever. Tom
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 8/24/2021 4:38:00 PM
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So they do, thank you Tom… Belle

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