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I Recall Each moment When so in love On that day you asked me to be your bride I said "yes" with a smile wide as a mile Happy romance Hearts a-dance Upon Air.
24th August 2021
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Date: 9/2/2021 6:04:00 AM
THis is a perfect Double Tetractys, Belle. The theme goes so well with the prompt picture you chose. I look forward to seeing this poem on the winners' list. ~ Regards // paul
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/2/2021 9:52:00 AM
Thank you Paul , I appreciate that very much… Belle
Date: 8/31/2021 5:07:00 PM
absolutely delightful Belle:-) hugs Jan xx
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 8/31/2021 11:21:00 PM
Thank you very much Jan. Hugs Belle :-) xx
Date: 8/31/2021 5:17:00 AM
You did this really well. Lovely.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 8/31/2021 11:19:00 PM
Thank you Rama, appreciated… Belle
Date: 8/29/2021 1:00:00 AM
Best wishes, Belle! I loved your line..,hearts a dance! Panagiota
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 8/29/2021 8:39:00 AM
Thank you Panagiota, may your heart be adance too… Belle
Date: 8/27/2021 7:59:00 PM
So beautifully done, Belle. This is a fave for me.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 8/27/2021 8:03:00 PM
Thank you Evelyn, very much appreciated… Belle
Date: 8/25/2021 10:13:00 AM
Very nice Belle. Great one :)
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 8/25/2021 3:35:00 PM
Thank you very much for that Heidi… Belle
Date: 8/25/2021 1:43:00 AM
Wonderful way to tackle this contest. My imagination is low. Best for a win. Hugs.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 8/25/2021 3:35:00 PM
Victor, knowing you your imagination won’t stay low for long. Thank you, Belle
Date: 8/24/2021 7:28:00 PM
No matter what happens, you'll always have those special memories, Belle. I like it so much. Blessings
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 8/25/2021 3:33:00 PM
Thank you Lasaad, memory is such a precious gift, life would be nothing without it. Blessings in return… Belle
Date: 8/24/2021 6:14:00 PM
Beautiful. I love it. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 8/24/2021 7:25:00 PM
Thank you Gina, God bless you always too… love Belle
Date: 8/24/2021 3:37:00 PM
moments forever
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 8/24/2021 4:39:00 PM
Forever etched on your heart. Thank you Mohamed… Belle
Date: 8/24/2021 3:30:00 PM
You never forget those moments Belle, they stay with you forever. Tom
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 8/24/2021 4:38:00 PM
So they do, thank you Tom… Belle
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