Beryl Edmonds Poet Tetractys

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Proposed
I 
Recall
Each moment
When so in love
On that day you asked me to be your bride
I said "yes" with a smile wide as a mile
Happy romance
Hearts a-dance
Upon
Air.
24th August 2021

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Paul Callus September 2, 2021 at 6:04 AM THis is a perfect Double Tetractys, Belle. The theme goes so well with the prompt picture you chose. I look forward to seeing this poem on the winners' list. ~ Regards // paul Beryl Edmonds September 2, 2021 at 9:52 AM Thank you Paul , I appreciate that very much… Belle

Jan Allison August 31, 2021 at 5:07 PM absolutely delightful Belle:-) hugs Jan xx Beryl Edmonds August 31, 2021 at 11:21 PM Thank you very much Jan. Hugs Belle :-) xx

Rama Balasubramanian August 31, 2021 at 5:17 AM You did this really well. Lovely. Beryl Edmonds August 31, 2021 at 11:19 PM Thank you Rama, appreciated… Belle

Panagiota Romios August 29, 2021 at 1:00 AM Best wishes, Belle! I loved your line..,hearts a dance! Panagiota Beryl Edmonds August 29, 2021 at 8:39 AM Thank you Panagiota, may your heart be adance too… Belle

Evelyn Judy Buehler August 27, 2021 at 7:59 PM So beautifully done, Belle. This is a fave for me. Beryl Edmonds August 27, 2021 at 8:03 PM Thank you Evelyn, very much appreciated… Belle

Heidi Sands August 25, 2021 at 10:13 AM Very nice Belle. Great one :) Beryl Edmonds August 25, 2021 at 3:35 PM Thank you very much for that Heidi… Belle

Victor Buhagiar August 25, 2021 at 1:43 AM Wonderful way to tackle this contest. My imagination is low. Best for a win. Hugs. Beryl Edmonds August 25, 2021 at 3:35 PM Victor, knowing you your imagination won’t stay low for long. Thank you, Belle

Sotto Poet August 24, 2021 at 7:28 PM No matter what happens, you'll always have those special memories, Belle. I like it so much. Blessings Beryl Edmonds August 25, 2021 at 3:33 PM Thank you Lasaad, memory is such a precious gift, life would be nothing without it. Blessings in return… Belle

Regina Mcintosh August 24, 2021 at 6:14 PM Beautiful. I love it. God bless you always, Love, Gina Beryl Edmonds August 24, 2021 at 7:25 PM Thank you Gina, God bless you always too… love Belle

Mohamed Omar August 24, 2021 at 3:37 PM moments forever Beryl Edmonds August 24, 2021 at 4:39 PM Forever etched on your heart. Thank you Mohamed… Belle

Tom Cunningham August 24, 2021 at 3:30 PM You never forget those moments Belle, they stay with you forever. Tom Beryl Edmonds August 24, 2021 at 4:38 PM So they do, thank you Tom… Belle