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poof, dough falls flat no proof of life… until the resurrection

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Date: 7/17/2023 7:28:00 AM
Dear Kim,in fact, nothing is lost, everything is transformed... including another life... salute, alkas
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/17/2023 8:30:00 AM
Thank you, Alkas! :)
Date: 7/14/2023 4:58:00 PM
Brought a smile to my face with this one, Kim. Nice Haiku! Smiles ! Blessings Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/14/2023 5:27:00 PM
Yay! Thank you, Bill!
Date: 7/14/2023 2:16:00 PM
Aw, this is a good comparison to life and death. It is good to know that though the doughs falls, it will rise again! <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/14/2023 5:28:00 PM
Thank you, B.J.!

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