Promises

Sunshine drifted through the marred pane;
Diffused, wavering, casting shadows in the room,
Wandering through the corners and the closet.

Spring arrived suddenly in this prairie land,
Melting dirty piles of old snow,
Turning farmyards into sloppy mires of mud.

Fresh air rushed into the old barn
Raising small, golden bits of last year’s hay,
Bringing tears to the man milking the black and white cow.

Lilacs sat upon the dinner table that night,
Lingering scent on the hands of the old woman who cut them;
Promising winter is now behind.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Pettit Avatar
January 8, 2011 at 3:29 PM
Promises are like unpaid markers. They are valueless unless they are cashed in. Good descriptiveness in this one.
Devonshire Avatar
January 7, 2011 at 1:22 PM
What a beautifuly way to see the promise of spring arrive in this rural setting. Your entry is priceless, Deb, and I'm sure it will be a winner. Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
January 6, 2011 at 4:47 PM
Lovely lilting lines Deb and if for the Spring contest good luck my friend... very expressive with this impressive read.. enjoyed and good luck with luv..
Onclaud Avatar
January 6, 2011 at 12:30 PM
i like the tempo of this melodious piece... resplendant,deb.. much luck in the contest! :) nette
La France Avatar
January 6, 2011 at 8:06 AM
This is so beautiful, deb, I was enthralled with the story, best of luck in the contest~~
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