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Promises Empty echoes Of a lover’s Short sighted vision Forever An unfathomable goal Enshrined In the ecstasy Of Love’s whimsy Kept Together In Loves “castle keep” Protected Cherished Defended Freed In tear-soaked agony Cursing The brevity Of forever

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Date: 5/27/2024 7:54:00 AM
Modern society doesn't seem to have forever. Your poem exposed the fickle nature of many people. I like the poem and how it describes, maybe with a bit of rebuke, our modern days.
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