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Promises

PROMISES flung far ahead towards an uncertain future secretly hidden in drawers, now antique bravely defended 'till perilous end forgotten in shadows like ice melts to water built brick by brick with fragile intentions wish upon wish mirage in the desert echoes the answers from far away here

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/3/2012 8:36:00 AM
congrats James on featured poem this week on PS.. a great write to share with all luv..
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Date: 4/2/2012 1:52:00 PM
Promises kept at distance. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 4/2/2012 8:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Jimbo. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/11/2009 7:49:00 AM
Today this one really speaks to my soul. It is sad but so well written. I feel for the subject as the promises seem to fade in the distance. It is so hard when trust is broken. Many blessings. Smiles from Lolita
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