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Promise Sign

Arching through the sky Pale colors float in the mist A Rainbow’s promise.

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Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 3/21/2010 7:26:00 AM

Pretty scene, Congrats on the feature. Vince

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/17/2010 7:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Barbara. Love, Carol

Daver Austin

Date: 3/16/2010 5:33:00 AM

Wet and wonderful! Congrats on this selection. Love, daver

Brian Strand

Date: 3/15/2010 12:51:00 AM

Congrats on your featured poem today BG.Rgds Brian and congrats on your recent contest success

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 3/14/2010 11:32:00 PM

Nice Haiku. Congratulations and God bless. Ernilando

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/14/2010 6:07:00 PM

A big congrats BG on your featured poem on the Soup this week... an excellent choice featured from an excellent poetess..luv and thankxxx for your great comments on my poetry and blogs..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/14/2010 12:59:00 PM

I just saw an image quite like this a day or two ago!! Lovely poem Barbara...congratulations on being on the featured page this week! Love, Carrie

Brian Strand

Date: 2/18/2009 12:31:00 AM

Beautiful image BG.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Date: 10/31/2008 4:42:00 PM

Nice use of imagery. I like the uplifting last line. Enjoyed reading this one. Keep on writing. Karen

Nigel Fawcett

Date: 10/31/2008 8:33:00 AM

"Haikus in the air, every sight and every sound". Beautiful Haiku Barbara, which for some reason started me singing! Thank you for your support and lovely comments. Love, Nigel

Christopher Higgins

Date: 10/31/2008 7:52:00 AM

I am learning to write this Haiku thing. I am loving the fact that I am trying. I loved this. Clearly written. Thank you for your comments today. You made smile. Chris.

Sharon Winter

Date: 10/30/2008 5:14:00 PM

Oh so beautiful. Excellent, inspiring haiku. Love, Shar

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 10/30/2008 11:01:00 AM

It's the symbol of the covenant! Beautiful haiku, perfect in syllable count and flow, but love the respresentation of the words the best. Michael