Progress

While bulldozers, drunk with gasoline
Have once again scared and maimed
Where once grew trees and meadows free
Is now an earth, encased by concrete seas

Engines roar,  to drown our ears in echoed glee
Where ghosts of children played their summer games
Forced to leave their childhood memories
In trenched out holes, and broken trees

The big top guns...ravage earth, then run
Dinosaurs that raise their iron heads
Jaws dripping with loads of earth and grass
As gophers rampaging through halls, bereft
are forcing nature's giants to their knees

Place by place destruction of the land
And while the green world grandfathers knew
Is gone in days, with every oak that falls
When this new invading presense is someday done
Has had his fill of dollar bills, then abandons one and all..
Who will mourn, who will recall?



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A   Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 12:16 AM
Carrie, Congratulations on your awesome somewhat angry win. Love LINDA
Raven Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 8:19 AM
Hi Carrie, Congratulations on your win in the contest....Vlad.
Leiser Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 7:37 PM
What a powerful and beautifully written poem, Carrie! Congrats on your win :)
A  Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 10:52 AM
carrie, congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting this Angry Topic. Have a nice day **SKAT**
The Rogue Rhymer Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 11:51 AM
Interesting Carrie-great job and congrats. on your win in my contest :)
Brown Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 7:37 AM
Congratulations on your win in this contest Carrie. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 6:01 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Natalie, Carrie
Dietrich Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 12:39 AM
VERY good take on the theme of this contest. MAybe the most profound of all that I have read. Congrats, Carrie!
Sweetheart Avatar
September 28, 2011 at 10:43 PM
Congrats Carrie on another excellent win with these dynamic words reflecting contest theme so perfectly luv..
Fraser Avatar
January 16, 2010 at 8:32 AM
Is it progression, demand or greed when they build these massive stores >> excellent piece Carrie >> James
Dufresne Avatar
January 10, 2010 at 2:49 PM
I am hearing you Carrie. They just built one hear too. I live in the country but at this rate ,don't know how long it will be country. And there are several abandoned malls. I don't know if anyone remembers what was there before.Good question. Wonder if many still care. Thanks for your kind comments. I appreciate them. -Robert
Strand Avatar
January 10, 2010 at 12:15 AM
Sadly ,not too many will until its too late Carrie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.pS We have had large snowfalls this weekand it has been a good reminder of the need for /value of community shops.
La France Avatar
January 9, 2010 at 11:34 PM
I remember as a child the community trying to save an ancient oak tree from being cut down, this brought back sad memories as we stood and watched it being destroyed.. your poem sends a staggering message of how much the almight dollar rules this world. And thanks so much for your comments on my poetry.
Dietrich Avatar
January 9, 2010 at 4:56 PM
MARVELOUS, Carrie!! I do so love how you write. And it's like the message of Avatar as well!! LUv, andrea
Kendrick Avatar
January 9, 2010 at 4:36 PM
Only the older generation will remember what once was. Great write on a topic that we all have thought about I'm sure. Keep the thoughtful pen flowing. Sara
Devonshire Avatar
January 9, 2010 at 7:40 AM
This awesome poem cuts to the core quickly, Carrie. I hate the way our natural beauty and environment are being sacrificed in the name of "construction" and "progress." We're really regressing and surely there will come a day when no one "will recall" the land we once knew. Great work! Love, Carolyn
Reed Avatar
January 9, 2010 at 5:20 AM
Its such a shame... us humans is consumes every thing up over a dollar.. and its not made from the U.S. A. no more... I miss you JackReed3... I wrote another cat poem if you wish to read it .... JackReed3
Spears Avatar
January 8, 2010 at 8:23 PM
Wonderful introspective poem. The bad thing about Walmart is they leave empty buildings to build bigger stores in the same towns. They are just run down if no one occupies them. Happy writing.
Freeman Avatar
January 8, 2010 at 6:43 PM
Nice job Carrie, There are places to build without destroying any more trees. Sincerely, Love, Moses
Sheart Avatar
January 8, 2010 at 3:40 PM
Greed sucks.This poem is very profound powerful. Ending says it all.My grandfather if still living today would be so taken back by the way our species destroys the earth, sky,water, forest and lands.We seem to think we own the earth as we destroy her soil for profit/our own people.With no regard for the consequences that follow.It's painful to think that it's the earth that will eventually need to survive at our expense.Can history changefuture?We'll find out.Bless your heart for writing this!
Norman Avatar
January 8, 2010 at 2:01 PM
the hungry corporate machine strikes again. When will we learn to say NO? who mourns and recalls the past atrocities that have disapeared into the ethers of time, left unrecorded by our official "education" drunk sycophantic society! At a guess i'd say no one will remember or mourn your childhood wonderland, unless you bother to remind them of it's existence and even then in twenty years time you may be labeled a conspiracist as no records validate your 'truth' ;) much love. sorry about rant....
Moreno Avatar
January 8, 2010 at 1:12 PM
The last line asks two wonderful questions. Beautiful work Carrie, excavation kills the beauty of the earth...Raul
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